Ahhhhhh loved it! Great work 3

I fell so dense no I didn't even realize all the "mistake" you made XD which just goes to show that you're a good writer ;P

I really enjoyed this story, I thought it was hilarious yet cute :D

You might already know this, but I thought I'd point it out since you mentioned you were a non-native English speaker. When you say "expelled from the school for two weeks minimum," a more proper word would be "suspended" instead of "expelled." Expelled is to me as if he were kicked out of school and never allowed back, whereas suspended is more temporary.

Also, I'm curious as to what "Yuki said silently" means? Isn't that an oxymoron?

Of the whole, I was quite impressed. I really like it, especially how you wove that joking comment in through the whole piece and allowed it to portray Kyo and Yuki's relationship. This was really sweet and seemed in character to me! I'm a bit skeptical of the Tohru/Haru relationship but thats more of a minor curiosity. Anyway, thank you for writing this!

I loved this story and died of laughter.

Omgosh soooo awesome!

Heh. Who was the student that started all of this? For some reason, I'm picturing Haru from Furuba, or Duo from Gundam Wing. Or maybe Tsukumo from Uraboku(Uragiri wa boku no namae o shitteiru). Hrm... Actually, Heero! Heero from GW... ROFL! and Duo's in the background laughing his ass off. I really like this.

Kawaii! Please write more for this pair, as for Yuki toda was the best day of his life, tonight his Kyo is to be laid by him in his room #.#

this book is definately going on my favorates list!i think i kinda wished there was a bit more acction between yuki and book made me look up a kyo and Uo fic too. " one of the best fruits basket books yet!

Lovely :3 xDDDD

Hey there!

Now, I am going to be completely honest here...your story is possibly one of my most favourite Yuki/Kyo stories I have read yet! (and I've read a lot of them)

I was just strolling around some of the stories around pages 27 or so, and I happened upon this by pure chance, and I am so glad I did!

I absolutely adore Kyo and Uo's relationship in this; the pet-names and teasing bring life to Kyo's character like no other story I've read. You've just made it all seem so natural, and you've written them as actual teenagers.

You had me hooked at the line 'his friends' in chapter one - I never see Kyo refer to them as his friends and I just LOVED it!

And the Yuki and Kyo parts - they were some of the best-written 'coming onto' scenes I've read in a long time. I love how Kyo's words seemed to give Yuki the confidence to act.

When Kyo latched onto the phrase to make himself feel better, it seemed like such an adorable and honest thing to happen, and no doubt people could see right through him.

Honestly, I just love how 'human' you made Kyo. You just don't see it. Really, Yuki/Kyo fics are always full of capslock and insults and fights, and so full of cliched nothings that just bore me to near tears.

Your fic was original and intense, and I will no doubt return to re-read this over and over as I do with my other favourites.

There is plenty more I could say, but you'd never hear the end of this review, haha!

I loved it, and I'm so glad you wrote this (and your A/N chocked full of modest humour at the bottom of part 3).

MK

This was the first Fruits Basket fanfiction that I've read that has actually made sense, and is cute to boot. Gosh. Thank you so much for this. ::heart::

One of the best fics i have read, LOVE IT!

O my gosh PERFECT ending LOVED it

I don't quite get the joke but that was fun :) And hot! And cute! :) Thank you for the enjoyable reading :)