Oh shit, I just...two words. Hotness overload. This was so goddamn hot I just can't even speak, write, or think properly omg this was so goddamn amazing I don't even and I can't even. okay I should stop now, I'm not making sense. Nosebleeds omg.

. . . blushes brightly You. Are. A. Yaoi. Goddess.

O-o that was hot!

Wow that was...No words...amazing comes to mind.

Ya know what's funny? With four guys, I've seen them all paired with each other, but this has got to be the only Saiyuki orgy I've seen yet. (Granted, I'm new into this fandom, but hey.)

One thing though. This fic is written in the past tense, am I correct? In this one sentence here "Though "raped" does not give the deed justice" the word "does" is present tense and should be replaced with "did".

Here: "The one person to never loose a game" the word "loose" means to release or let go. The correct word in this sentence is "lose".

All in all, I really enjoyed this fic.

~Foxy

I don't like sanzo x goku pairing but I LOVE gojyo x hakkai pairing...sweet!

wow...this is pretty damn hot! Hahaha. I was surprise that Sanzo chose Hakkai. But not too suprising that Goku chose Sanzo. _ Hehehe. Poor Hakkai! Must have felt like a lamb being led to his death. o Again just love it!

Russle: XD Nice... Absolutely wonderful.

Chrisy: Woo! *Tears in eyes from completely different thing*

. this is great

lines were very funny indeed. The characters were protrayed well too.

I like it, It was an interesting game of Mahjong. Thank you for writing it.

Laughed. My. Freaking. Ass. Off!

Hakkai is definitely going to start losing Mahjong more often if he has anything to say about it.

i freakin loved this story absolutely beautiful sanzo and goku hakkai and goyjo all together in one room.

One word: Hot

Hehehe, that was smexy and funny at the same time. X3 Sanzo pet Goku for...er..yeah. lol

Wow! That was certainly interesting. I liked it! I liked how they weren't actually together before hand. Although, why did Hakkai pick Goku? That was the only thing I didn't get. Course, I guess someone had to pick him.