Loved this :) it was really fluffy and adorable and the end xD haha perfect. Great job editing and such however I noticed that sometimes a got kinda lost with where each character was and what they were doing. But other than that LOVED IT! Haha great job!

I loved this. Good storytelling, thanks for sharing. :)

Ek 3 THEY ARE SO CUTE. RYOMA, TEZUKA I LUFF CHOO~!

I really like this! It's well written and wonderful, and well... wonderful. I wonder how everyone reacts to the kiss in the middle of court...

Well done!

It's just like them to set their own pace.

I love this concept of Ryoma's reason for playing tennis. Brilliant fic! Your imagery was poignant and your story and characters were IC, and wow, you made Tezuka and Ryoma's relationship come together so well! The way you wrote it, it was completely natural, Ryoma's lost look and his head on Tezuka's shoulder, and Tezuka's reaction when Ryoma isn't at the second Australian Open. And you have mad tennis writing skills! Reading Tezuka and Ryoma's match was almost like watching the anime. Reading this was a genuine joy. Thanks for writing and posting!

hahaha, hilarious! loved it. you have to write more like it. and if possible, a long story. great job!

Good story on both of them in pro tennis and how they got together!

This story's just perfect! No other words for it. The way Echizen frustrates Tezuka without even knowing it XD And the end of the story reminds of this wonderful fanart by EdenTheDoors.

~ m a y ~

I don't like the present tense one bit, but the plot is good. :)

It's not clear when you jump timelines. It is quite common to italize (sp?) flashbacks so the reader can relate correctly.

Anyway, good work. :)

xD

Honestly, I'm not too fond of TezuRyo...unless their relationship is founded on tennis, so I really really loved this one! It was so great! (and the weird thing was that I'm pretty sure that their actions are what would happen in real - scuse me - 'anime/manga' life _~

"Ryoma smirks. Tennis, he thinks, is about the game. And possibly being felt up by your boyfriend on Center Court, Wimbledon."

KO...BEST ENDING LINE EVER!

I absolutely loved it!

Nice story!

sadly...there aren't any REAL gay tennis players kissing on the courts...in front of thousand of crowd...sigh...

LOVED THIS FIC! tezuryo is heaven...