Sad.

Surprisingly not, I like this kind of plot you'd pulled off. Since any stories which have their heroines (almost) died fighting are very much appealing. Nice story, regardless the song ;)

Very touchy subject matter there.

sad

I honestly love this song, from Nickelback.] I've got their CD. The pairing Naraku and Hakudoshi together to do the whole school-bang thing was great. Well done.

Oh my god, that's so sad. I like it a lot.

I don't know...it was really strange... It reminded me of the news we hear sometimes of students going beserk. In all honesty it freaked me out a bit... And I thought it really well written.:)

~ fantaskie

Wow...It's good...great job

hey its great. r u going 2 do a second part?

*cries a river*

That's so...so...depressing!

But your choice of having Hakudoshi be the worst out of the two lunatics was a good one...since he's eviler than Naraku, after all...*sniffles*

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I love it! What a depressing masterpiece of a songfic!

this is dark, but i like it! it hits closer to home than anything else...and i applaud you for it! _

Wow.

Shadowblade, this is a very powerful oneshot. I sat and wept because it hit so close to home

This is very difficult for me to read as one of our schools here was a site for a shooting like this. The school in question is a high school and is only a matter of blocks from me. My girl will be atending there someday.

The grade school she attends goes through a drill once a month,no not fire, a drill of what to do if someone should come in and start shooting. The school goes into lockdown and the classrooms all lock their doors. These young children are told to lay on the floor and stay silent for 20 minutes. They are told in a real life situation that if they make any noise, it could mean their lives.

Where did the innocence of childhood go? Did we as adults kill it?

I pray for my 10 year old daughters safety everyday and cry for every bit of her childhood stolen.

Sorry for the long review, it just hit hard.

Hugs from your favorite Lady,

LadySafire

i felt like crying! please make a sequence like that, then Kagome is to be alive! please? please? thanks...

wow...depressing...

wow it's so sad but still so good. you did a wonderful job