You builded up hype about naruto and then made him a bitch. What a freaking waste of a fanfic.

Oi I’m loving the story but couldn’t help but notice it was only updated on 2007 I was wondering when the next chapter was going to be out

You made me lose interest in the story straight from the start it's shit to me.

Wow this chapter was long and it looked cool

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Sad end to a good idea

continues the story

Okay umm so far this fic gets a 8.5 out of 10, There where a few things I didn't like with this fic. 1st
How you made them into serial killers don't get me wrong I know it's StarCraft and their part of the
Zerg. But why would you kill harmless civilians when you are the top of the food chain it's beneath
them and only makes them like their enemy. 2nd How Naruto is only using a single gun why not have him using everything he trained to use. 3rd How this fic was up for 2 years and hasn't even reached the 100k mark not to mention not being updated for almost 6 years. Please update this fic!

Preetty sure this dude here is dead. Lets burn the body with pitchforks to use hay to help stoke the flames and look and sound like an angry mob. And dance under the moonlight, coated in his blood, for we are witches, in a mob, chasing... a dead body. And losing the chase. Lol, this is fun!

Awesome. I had to laugh at the author add in after the 'lemon' because it was kind of right. Had a blast reading this chapter and hope to see more for this story some day in the future.

Still cool. Curious how Naruto's presence will effect the things Sarah does in he future as well as what he will do if he returns 'home'. Should prove to be a blast to find out.

Very, very cool. I was a little leery of how this would turn out when I read the description but you did a great job with it. Can't wait to read more and I hope that even more comes out in the future.

like naruto and kerrigan together, hope things go well for the two

Just update whenever you can man, this is a great fic

I have to say it's been a LONG time...