My InuYasha/Kagome reserved heart will be stubborn and tell you that it didn't see enough romance, that it might of felt it rather Kikyou and InuYasha focused, and Kagome portrayed like a desperate love seeker that always gets second place. I have to admit I did feel this and it was a bit hard to swallow. I also didn't get the connections you made from the final chapter in the manga to your epilogue, so I would be really interested in knowing. But really, I think this story is beautifully written and that you captured my mind by being being beautifully-tragic. The more things I read/watch, the more I think that it's the bittersweet plots, where it continues to hurt you time and again, you return to just because your so determind to try to somehow will the outcome you want. I think its something in human nature that makes us attracted to the bittersweets. And its a real pain. But thats besides the point. Great story. I know you love Shesshomaru, but please consider writing a story/one-shot for InuYasha and Kagome again!

It's Ayame. Ayumi is Kagome's friend with the curly hair from high school in the anime.

This story made me feel good. I may even start enjoying romantic stories once again...I said maybe.

very, very good twist on the original inuyasha storyline. i like it. and i like hoe you brought inuyasha back at the end too.

.Glob

This story is BEAUTIFUL :D It's funny, the characters were perfect, and it was just awesome. I really liked how you added a bit of your own onto Kagome without making her too different, and honest to god, I teared up with the Rin bit. I had to stop reading for a bit since I couldn't see.

As I said, absolutely beautiful. I'm so upset that I hadn't found this sooner :( 5 STARS! woo

you are an amazing person!

all of them are in character.

loved your descriptions...(i think i shed a tear for kagome letting him go)

perfect transition and link to the original story line

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I'm rereading this! One of my favorite stories haha!

This is pretty good! Keeps it ups mi amiga!

*sniffle sniffle* That. Was. Simply, AMAZING!

I was so wrapped up in your story that when Inuyasha and Kagome were sitting under the god tree after Inuyasha's "outing" and he confessed that he actually cared about her and that he needed her I jumped up and screamed out "YES! I KNEW IT!" and I'm not 100% sure but I think I did a touchdown dance :P

Thank you for sharing this story with us. It was sooooo good! :D

I love this story you are awesome!

I LOVE IT! DO MORE DOO MORE imean stories do more stories

aw that ending is so sad and yet so happy

Hm. Inuyasha's different because he's a hanyou, right? Or is it something else... i wonder where this is going. I'm so intrigued! XD

xx Boat xx

OH MY GOD this was absolutely awesome and i am loving to to pieces already! XD

Oh, and Kagome and the donuts? Priceless.

xx Boat xx

awsome story dude