Hey :)

I know it's been more than 8 years since you last updated, but I really like this story of yours and it really would be totally amazing, if you'd ever decide to update it again.

All the best,
Ella

Ok. I know you haven't updated this story since 2009, but it is an AMAZING story. So well written and so enthralling. I have loved the progression of Snape's character. Please please consider continuing this story!

I do hope you will finish this one day. It's really terrific and there is still so much more to go.
I read your bio to see if you commented on it but you haven't. I seem to be in a similar place inlife as you and find time seems to more faster the more guilt I heap on myself for not finishing my own story.
I wish you luck.
Debbie

is this story complete?

This is a very well thought out and written fan fiction with only a few spelling errors/typos. I hope that you will continue to complete this story at some stage.

I hope Sev will spend part of the car trip telling Harry (but not us) about Harry's grandparents.

Erin the dummy could have waited one more day to interrogate Snape, and Harry would not have faced a horrible morning tomorrow.

She probably was not "literally spiting nails." lol

Poor, poor Arabella and all her cats!

Ha. Women are endless amounts of trouble. Any episode of Rawhide will teach you that much.

In this chapter you mention how quickly Albus' Patronus can find Snape if needed. Too bad Dumbledore hadn't remembered he had a Patronus when he wanted to call Severus, tell Severus to immediately go rescue Harry, and had not been more succinct and bossy when sending Sev on a rescue mission. Instead, he called Sev into his office for a long discussion, Sev left to collect potions, came back to the office, went and had long discussion with Arabella and then with Mundungus, before finally bothering to go check on Harry who'd been in mortal danger. I was about ready to smack Albus and Sev in the first few rescue chapters. ha

Good chapter. I, too, am worried about Pumpkin, but also about Arabella Figg and all of her own cats.

Wow, I just loved this fic. It is brilliant and I am very sad to see it has not been completed. I started reading this on Potions and snitches before moving here to read the last 6 chapters. I was surprised to see so many references to Australia, we rarely get mentioned in HP fics. I was shocked when I clicked on your bio and saw you were also from Victoria! I have lived in the same house in Victoria my entire life. Reading your authors notes brought back so many memories! I was about nine when Black Saturday happened. I can remember that time so clearly. Hard to believe it will be 8 whole years next month! While I know its unlikely after all this time, it would be amazing to see this fic completed, and maybe a sequel while your at it (; That's for the great read

Hi,
I've enjoyed several of your stories... but this, in my opinion, is your best! I do hope you will return to finish (although I realise odds are slim, considering you have not updated in seven years now...)!
Anyway, you are a gifted writer and your original idea here is masterfully crafted. It would be a shame to abandon it, and I hope you will come back.
Cece

well, I have finished reading it, and am ready to turn the page. I hope you come back to finish this one. your writing is really enjoyable.