Reviews for The Snake and The Flower
EstelElanor chapter 6 . 6/15/2011
Oh dear, this is probably the most hilarious chapter so far! Loved how Teddy is so devious.
kingslayers chapter 6 . 1/16/2011
I still think Lily was in the wrong but I'm glad thy made up. Rose didn't have the best plan of attack either, loved teddys genius ;)
kingslayers chapter 3 . 1/16/2011
Yes! I loves the dynamics in this family! Personally, I think it's Lilys fault. I mean, yes, she was hurt but it's not roses fault!
Loslote chapter 6 . 11/28/2010
I know this is nearly two years after this ended, and I don't know if you'll even get this, but I wanted to say that I loved this. It was hilarious in all the right places. Well done! :D
xXxtellmewhyxXx chapter 6 . 11/14/2010
Brilliant! Haha love the ending, but I kinda wish there was more:) good job!
x-rayLady chapter 6 . 9/19/2010
This is a weird kind of ending, since I don't have the 'ending' feeling, but I love the idea of using Teddy's kid to pester Lucius ;-)
Me chapter 6 . 5/21/2010
Most hardest is not grammatically correct. (Very end of the last chapter)

Other that that, it had me laughing very loudly. I liked Teddy's deception. It added an interesting point to the story.

Good story, I greatly enjoyed it.
over-rehearsed chapter 6 . 10/15/2009
I loved that story! although, I do wish you could have written about Rosie's prank on James and Fred, would've been hilarious. I'm glad it all ended up okay, and wow I'm reviewing like a whole year after this fic...
Shadowdog96 chapter 3 . 9/23/2009
Wow. Filch was old in the original series but if he is still around he must be really old. I guess it kind of fits the Harry Potter theme, though. I mean if Dumbledore was over a hundred years old, Filch can't be that old. I like the story. : )
jociobear1987 chapter 2 . 7/31/2009
not as good and well written as the prequel...
serendipitousbeginnings chapter 6 . 7/15/2009
Oh, this last chapter was hilarious! The bit with the potion and Fred and James...Teddy and Victoire's kids... and especially Astoria's plan :D Keep writing! :)
Lani1402 chapter 6 . 11/22/2008
i liked your story but i thought that that was a really low point to end it on.

It should've ended with something to do with the SR relationship seeing as that is the main ship rather than knowing that teddy got babysitters.

otherwise, i thought it was a great story. i really liked the way you manipulated it so sometimes i felt sorry for lily, sometimes rose and then finally both :P

great work

-L
Lupin4Tonks chapter 6 . 11/15/2008
I love this story. Teddy's two monsters, teehee. Aren't kis great? :D
ndesi62 chapter 6 . 10/9/2008
Lol. It was a great story, truly, and the ending was arguably the best part. Love it.
xoxphoenix chapter 6 . 9/24/2008
Fantastic story. I love the interactions between Rose, Scorpius and Lily especially. While reading the story you're totally egging Rose and Scorpius on but can't help but feel a little sorry for poor Lily who seemed to fancy her self in love with Scorpius. The angst and emotion was really well delivered.

Of course I couldn't help but laugh at all the pranks and plans throughout the story my favorite being Rose's prank on the boys and Teddy's idea to ensure no mini Rose or mini Scorpius' existed for quite a while. You already know I love the way you portray Astoria. Great job again!
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