Okay, warning well received. I like the Marluxia Vexen pairing...mostly...but yay, the scientist actually goes insane (sort of) like he is supposed to!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUGGGGGHHHHHHH SWEET DIALGA PALKIA AND GIRATINA WHY HAVE YOU DONE THIS YOU SICK TWISTED FIEND HOW COULD YOU RAPE THE KINGDOM HEARTS CANON SO BADLY AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUGH YOU COULD HAVE JUST RENAMED THE CHARACTERS WITH ORIGINAL NAMES AND IT WOULD WORK AS A TORTURE PORN STORY, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DO THIS TO AN AWESOME SERIES AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGGGGGHH I NEED TO GO STAB MY EYES OUT WITH A RUSTY POTATO PEELER NOW AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!

O.O...w...wow

Wow... that was amazing, I absolutely loved this. I could totally see this as a movie of some sort, it'd be so incredible

I loved this, so so much. I'm still geeking out about it, and trust me, it takes a lot to make me geek out. Just imagining all these events happening, gives me nightmares. But it also makes me smile, that cruel side of me smiles.

You should've kept some Zemyx I could imagine Demyx drowning someone, Zexion doing the dirty deed with the corpse then Demyx doing him from behind. That, would be lovely, necrophilia and... whatever word to describe Dems. Now I feel like writing it out.

Anyways, still loved this. Its hot and daring, very bold as well. MarVes is cute, I can imagine Marluxia actually being that way with poor Vexy X3

Write some more horror, I love it!
-Sigh

I do not suggest reading this when its dark and raining outside whilst listening to extremely hard rock music. O.o"

Damn... This is wiked scary and so twisted... But for some strange, demented reason I almost feel like I enjoyed that gore fest... Oh god... The mansion is getting to me too. D:

0.0 What the fuck did I just read? This was the worst mind rape of a fic that I have ever read! Just WHAT THE FUCK?!

best wank ever

Yowza! This is on par with what I write! Lovvvvvving it!

I... I remember... this was the very first fanfic I ever read. I was very unfamiliar with... mature... content such as this, being about 13 I think. I had decided to explore a little. I saw this, with the warning about gore and such and thought to myself, "Oh, it can't be that bad."

I was wrong. And I'm very glad I decided to go on my little adventure. Beautifully horrific and beautifully written, thank you, this will always be one of my closest favorites :)

I LOVE IT! In a strange sorta way, its the best thing in the world that has ever graced my laptop screen.
HRMM!
To get technical, I didn't find any grammar or spelling mistakes and your writing style is amazing!

WOW! Dude, this rox!

This story was AMAZING! It was so gruesome but yet...intriguing...I can't describe my feeling towards this...it's so amazing, I ADORE this story! :D And I love how you still managed to put romance into too at the end, like lovers in darkness :D

you're now officially included in my awesome list for making this. this is awesome *thumbs up*

I feel wrong for admitting this, but I got some twisted sort of satisfaction reading this. Seriously. (Then again, I tend to find people covered in blood in movies and such more beautiful than without.) And thus, I applaud you, [: This was...incredible, in it's beautiful, twisted, horrific sort of way. 3

WOW, this was seriously the meanest, cruelest, darkest thing I've ever read. Great idea, I am deeply impressed. Some of the reactions of the victims didn't really seem to fit in. Vexen refusing to wear a skirt for example. I mean, raped two times, the first time being tied to a wall, the other inside a pool of blood, and he is still talking back?

I really liked the way how you managed to subtly build in the change in Vexen's mind, that he starts to become one of them. Seemed like there was already lots of potential for another whackjob. Great. I am gonna look up your other stories. Your writing is wild ( in a sort of disturbing kind of way, but still, awesome).

Eh, Homing Hydra Kooshball Shark Penises was worse (or better, if that's what does it for ya). This is a close second, though.