I'm not even sure what to say about this. I love the whole thing! It was beautifully written. I loved Kisuke finding his Bankai and him training with Yamamoto. This is probably my favourite bleach fic.

I'm reading chapter 7 and can't for the life of me think why you said she has olive skin when she literally doesn't?

This is the most well written fanfic I have ever read. I know it has been a long time since you wrote it, but I hope you update it one day! You totally have the skills to become a professional writer.

nice

I know this was written long ago, but I want to add in my two cents:
This was, without a doubt, one of the most phenomenal stories I have ever read on this site. Your writing style is incredibly captivating and your of words, phrases, and dialogue left me wanting more. The plot was simultaneously heart wrenching, frustrating, and brilliant. I am in wonder at your skills.

this is so good it might as well be canon!

You are the type of author that could give Urahara a pink elephant (random, I know) for his zanpakto...and I wouldn't even care! That's because you write so well, you could make me mad at you for doing something, and I would still love it. Great plot, awesome grammar (which is rare for fanfics in general) and it was an awesome read. Way to go!
By the way, jazzpha sent me here. XD

This story was amazing! I tore through it in a day, and was practically giddy when I learned the two would be happy in the end! That phrase, "I order you to ravage every inch of me" was pure gold. Thank you for the story :D

Wow I've been obsessed over this story ever since I found it! Love it! I feel like a lot of what happened made sense and everything was so well written! Wish there were more!

Hi!
I just finished your story, and I found it great. I love Kisuke and Yoruichi because of their detachment from the rest of the Gotei 13, because of their independence, because of their indolent and careless side. I've never thought about how they met (it seems so natural to see them together), but your story convinces me that it had to be that way :)
They are really well described (and you make it credible). The evolution of their relationship is excellent, based on game and curiosity, leading to something more serious and accomplished. Just as the complicity of Isshin is appreciable (haha, I loved to see him), their slow progress in the power spheres of the Gotei 13 is admirably conducted. It inevitably leads to a situation where the Bankai of Kisuke causes damage (Chaos sword, great!). When he has to ask help to Ukitake (such a powerful moment), I was moved to tears. I also like Soi Fon and her hate of Kisuke (the begin of this last chapter was funny!).
I also found really just the fact that Yoruichi should waive her admiration for Kisuke in order to gain power. Love is something else, and I was delighted to see them re-start their relationship as equals. The perfect balance!
I apologize for my English (its not my native language).
Thank you for sharing this amazing story!

ok wow um wow MIND BLOWN
this is beyond fantastic, this is the closest to perfection, this is Kisuke and Benihime becoming one in their bankai level of perfection.
as a fellow writer, i know how WIPs are the bane of one's existence and how life gets in the way so all i have to say is thank you. Thank you for writing this piece of perfection, for making me stay gaping, slackjawed at my computer for twenty three chapters and revelling in every bit of awesomeness that is this fic. and my god the zanpakutous, the way to attain bankai, the philosophy behind it, the link between spirits and souls, benihime being one of the baddest motherfuckers ever, and my babies Kisuke and Yoruichi, whith their love fitting seamlessly into the overall intrigue, Ukitake my love, ISSHIN AND KUUKAKU DAMMITT

my frakking heart. you own it dude, this made my entire week end. and thank you so much for brightening my day with this piece of absolute awesomesauce. THANK YOU SO FRAKKING MUCH.

I hope you plan on continuing this- I LOVE it. I just want to say awesome job, totally amazing so far, and I blame you for my lack of sleep over the course of the week. XD Hope to see more soon!

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. You may have kept me up until 3 am, but this has been worth it so far. I can't wait to read the rest- this is just amazing! Great work so far, I hope to finish this up by the end of the day.

This story was so well written I didn't even realize when it ended. Or was that the end?

Amazing story! You're a great writer, thought it doesn't feel like it was the end, was it?