You ended on a cliffhanger T.T I can see why, but I also want the story to continue. Great job!

Wow, this is great! The lemon we're hot as hell and well done. There was buildup of characters and plot. It made me fall in love with Deidara, yeah.
So good!

She should have just asked hum to leave Akatsuki for Konoha.

Very nicely done!

Important question: WHY DIDN'T DEIDARA DEFECT TO KONOHA?! Wouldn't that be the best choice?

Unusual pair, you write them so well! But curious what happened after with the war.

Loved this!
:)

I love it so much I might just go die now

Omg thank you thank you thank you for being the first fic I read that made use of Deidara's extra mouths; all four of them! He's such an intricate being, and it's a shame when stories don't take full advantage of all of his extra parts. That's why I'm so glad you took all of his anatomy into consideration when writing this. The story was so in depth and wonderful, I couldn't tear my eyes away. Very bittersweet towards the end. It pulled at my heartstrings. You are a talented writer. Thank you for making my day with this story. I hope you write many more in the future.

THAT WAS SO HOT BUT CUTE AND THE ENDING HAD ME SNIFFLING OH GOD

J-Pop Princess, you are definitely one of my favorite writers I have come across! Everyone of your pieces are so full of emotion, and your writing brings tears to my eyes, both happy and sad, in just about every story! Please keep writing!

Well written porn :D

...daaaaamn...that was...that was something else. I don't even...*trails off in awe* that was amazing, easily best smutty SakuDei fic I've ever read. I salute you XD.

This story was amazing! The ending was bittersweet and I feel bad that they can't actually get together. It sort of makes me wish that he switched sides and joined Konoha. It's such a shame that they might not have accepted him anyway.

have I ever mentioned in any previous reviews on stories of yours I have previously read just how much I love your stories? well, I do. and you really should know this. I guess I should be thanking cynchick for helping you out as well then (by the way, her writing is amazing too (just thought I'd get that in there too))

anyway, I've been trying to read this for some time now, but I always forgot about it. well, until now. I thought "read it, before you forget and you get pissed off again", which I did, and I am most grateful for it

the one thing I would recommend to others though, is to not read it all at once. YOU WILL HAVE LEMON OVERLOAD! if I had read it over a longer period of time (started it just before work the other day (bad idea) and at other bad times when I couldn't read much, so it took 3 days), I definitely would have appreciated it a lot more.

again, thank you to both of you for the LOVELY (lemon) story :D