great story i loved it

Awwww well they better have a baby in this story because that would complete there already perfect family.

Funny times with the stabler kids. Great chapter.

I love the story! There is so much love between them.

The last line, Epic!

Cute story as always.

Hi you said you haven't seen Maureen she was the daughter that saw the man burned on the beach. Umm dickie showed up when Elliot's friend which is an astronaut names dick shows up in an ep. I don't remember the name. Um I'm not sure when Lizzie shows up though. Btw don't ever stop writing fan fiction you do amazing at it your stories are perfect!

Thanks for the story! It was very good.

Now my eyes are bloodshot red. So touching and sad.

So sad...your writing touches my heart. Do you know how much work I am neglecting reading your stories (man, I am so going to get further behind). Oh well, on to the next chapter.

Wow! Just read this! Loved it!

Wow, dealing with 25 preteens for ten hours must have been a challenge!

I like this story, and your writing is both technically good and interesting

That must be a pretty big bed if it can fit 2 children and 2 adults!

I hope everything turns out ok. I wonder how Elliot is gonna take it.

I loved this story it made me cry and laugh fantastic story

Tanya