"...how can anyone be homo and like girls?"... You've never heard of bisexual people? They like both boys and girls.

This is the limit of nonsense I can take

It's jiji not jojo

Zabuza is having a fan girl moment. I love it. Lol

Old man I'm not angry you kept this a secret from me for 15 years lets forgets about that and continue. I'm not in a any way angry for, oh I don't know, withholding my heratige, stunting my growth and lying to me for 15 years, you might not of ever told me if I had not found out about this scroll so it's alright let's just move on because I am a demon or don't have a brain if I accept this

Extremely stupid I say.. You need a lot of work. On your mind not your stories.. You need to be able to come up with interesting ideas rather than plain ideas. Ones that would help readers become interested not bored the moment they walk here.

this story is absolutely awesome, please write more!

Yugao hime should be in the harem.

How does he have a clan compound that is 10 acers realy where did you get your brain at?pep stores or what!? The beginning i read not even half way i trashed it this fic is trash!

like

uh this says complete but it doesn't look complete

oh good lord its a zabuza fan boy

err i remember readign this story back ALONG time ago and thought it was awesome..but after rereading up to the 2nd chapter its like errr ok its nto as good as i thought.. i mean !; i dont mind zabuza beingwell fan boy its kinda funny comedy kinda thing..but 2: naruto is only at least jounin lvl after training for 30,000 days 82 years round up a lil cuz of leap year..so that would more training and shit then even madara and harashima ever had...he should be at least above kage lvl easily

naruto heir of hercules and leonidas

...uh...cool idea, writting great; OOCness not so cool. Could have worked if you had Zabuza be fanguyish in his head and engaged from there, but otherwise, I just couldn't stomach it. Sorry, still a cool idea though.