Wow! I love how Tony turned it around on Ziva. He really knows how to talk.

Oh nice, that slap in the face to Ziva was very unexpected. Great story.

ah, this is great. I *loved* that scene between Tony and Ziva, and I love seeing the repercussions. Too bad they did not do it on the show. I could see it just as you wrote it.

haha. :P cute.

That was so funny!

I enjoyed it very much.

may i agree with teisha?

I love the rare occasions where Tony wins.

Extremely amusing story, wonderful tag for the episode. My only question is, why is this filed as 'angst'? I would have put it under humor, but maybe that's just me and I missed something vital in the story.

ha, tony should have known that little episode would bite him on the ass later!

good post-ep!

Hilarious! You have Ziva and Tony (and Gibbs, for that matter) fabulously in character. That scene in the episode is hilarious, but it seems naive to think it didn't have some sort of repercussions. I can just imagine how scandalized Aunt Nettie was when Ziva's "husband" told her he didn't want her to call Ziva anymore. :) I love how Tony hides all his sharp/dangerous items before Ziva approaches his desk. Great filler bit. I thoroughly enjoyed the fic.

nice... well written...there should be a sequel!

Tony's even better than I thought; I was absolutely sure Ziva would whump him good.

first off, that phone call bit was HILARIOUS. omg, i had to pause my video and laugh laugh LAUGH! i love how you did the end and the David family reunion lol. :) great work! and "every little girl wants a pony" lol! Oh, TONY!

Wonderful!

Did my begging on the special ops board have some effect? If so I am not to proud to continue begging for fanfic.

I loved this. I liked Tony's rant at the end, she does have it coming.

Loved the discription of the reactions of everyone in the David family. Great story.

Zive would so do that, and that's why this is SO funny!