Reviews for Test of Trust |
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andjelija.nenic chapter 9 . 1/13 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/16/2014 A promising story but your telling of it needs work |
Ryle Culler chapter 15 . 6/30/2010 Love your story can't wait to read more! |
DarkXAngelXWolf chapter 1 . 6/16/2010 very awsome! |
Elita One chapter 11 . 7/18/2008 they have been reunited |
Cman710 chapter 10 . 7/17/2008 Good chapter, keep it up. |
Elita One chapter 10 . 7/17/2008 aww Hide has twins lol |
Elita One chapter 9 . 7/16/2008 cool she got a special access Oberon hu nice |
Elita One chapter 8 . 7/16/2008 lol she totally just passed out |
Cman710 chapter 7 . 7/15/2008 Good chapter, but I didn't like the underlining so much, hard on the eyes. Keep it up. |
Cman710 chapter 5 . 6/10/2008 Tell me about it on the ride thing; Sides ain't to happy that they want him to be an Ice Cream Truck.(yes that's the truth; they called the truck the twins and there are pics. It had beetter be one of their pranks) So he's been pissy lol Anyways. Great chapter; can't wait for the next one! |
Elita One chapter 4 . 5/2/2008 coolies |
Frog1 chapter 3 . 4/4/2008 It was good chapter, but too short. |
Cman710 chapter 3 . 4/3/2008 Sorry to hear you got into an accident! My friend was in one too last year, those are hard to get over. |
Cman710 chapter 2 . 4/3/2008 This caught my eye a while ago, but I just got to reading it. It's very good, I like your writting style, it draws you in and doesn't bore us to tears with too much description or too much dialogue, just the right ammount of both.(I do have that problem with dialogue sometimes) I hope to see a new chapter soon! |