aww so sweet

Beautiful. I love it. The ending is so semi-sweet it makes my chest ache. Here he is at the end, going to the warmth and the happiness, but still not there yet. Hopeful, uplifting...and still hanging on a note of suspense, because I want to see him get there.

And the romance is so gentle, so sweet, and so real.

That has to be one of the sweetest things i have ever read.

That was beautiful.

"Ibiki tipped his head back and felt the huge, fluffy flakes touching his skin. The sensation was strange; like butterfly kisses, fleeting and infinitely gentle"

I really enjoyed this line.

This was a well written story. I liked how you wrote about a relationship that isn't often explored. Nice work.

Lily

I'm getting the feeling you like Ibiki, Iruka and Genma. Good choices. I luvved this one as well, though Ibiki seems a little OOC in the end, but it's in a nice way.

lovely story! i have a soft spot for Ibiki-Iruka friendship fics and I think you did it really well _

I won't claim that I know Ibiki all that much nor anyone else really, but even I can see that this is a break through for him. One thing that I can't get out of my mind though. Is the hot chocolate really that delicious? ...What, I love hot chocolate.

That was good. -Grimm

It never sices to amaze me how so many writers can say one thing and then go with something else. You say 'friendship' yet you got them kissing by the end of this fic, like with so many other fics I have read that it gets on my nerves. Not to be mean, I did like reading this, but come on does EVERYTHING have to be yaoi with you people? Even in friendships?

I like this.

That was well done. Not often you see insight into Ibiki. Your writing flows and your style is coherant. Nice.

Kawaii! Lovely little ficlet.

Ah! This is so cute! I've never really paid that much attention to Ibiki. Have to take another look at him. Anyone that likes Iruka is ok with me. LOL good story! Very touching!

Great story! Liked seeing their interaction and how even Ibiki can't help but smile around Iruka. Interesting that he had trouble interogating him. Loved it!