Great story

Who are those people who is Jenn and roy and all those? I only know Kori dick gar and raven and Wally

“Lord, tell me how to say no to this.”

Oh no. It’s the teacher crush community of tumblr.

I’ve read this story a bazillion times, and reading this chapter makes me scream every time! Oh boy, Dick is in for it this time

Amazing I took me a while to finish this one! I love this whole sequel! I wish it turned into a tv show this is soooo good!

Oh my gosh that labour scene was hilarious! I ended up laughing out loud and annoying everyone! Keep up the good work :D

I never fucking got it, it’s a that 70’s show reference

Worst story I have ever read. Badly reasearched, badly written, rambling, waste of time to read.

So, Roys parents leave when when Jade has a week to go on her due date. Are you kidding me? In addition, you have two 17 year old boys knowing how to deliver a baby ( they know to tell her to push and the three of them have no problem with the water breaking, seeing her lower half naked and lastly no ambulance called. Do you know ANYTHING about childbirth? Obviously not. Mabel your next soap opera will be better researched.

Getting weaker. I have never hear anyone refer to smokes in a " box" pack is the word and blunts are usually weed. You are obviously a upper middle class white kid. Nothing wrong with that. Keep trying

I will probably quit this in a couple of chapters because you have way too many character plots and the plots themselves are pretty weak. I guess it its ok for your base audience which should be about twelve years old. This love triangle between Richard Grayson, Kori And Xavier is the stupidest. Dick is a former playboy. Kori is a cheerleader and Xavier is supposed to be this teen gangster. A normal teenaged boy especially one as popular as Dick wouldn't put up with being cuckholded no matter how pretty she was. Kori you've made into an ver emotional, stupid with a taste for bad boys. Xavier's character is the stupidest. Teenaged boys especially white ones are usually to insecure and inexperienced to run with the mob. What you've tried to create here is a teen daytime soap opera and it's not working.

Good chapter. I was pulling for Elliot

I GOTTA SAY THE END BUT BRUCE! ARE YOU SERIOUS AF? NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I THOUGHT BATMAN WAS A GOOD GUY BUT THIS IS TOO OVERBOARD.

WTF NOOOOOOOOO! IM SO FREAKED OUT, FIRST BY HER CONFESSION AND THIS? NOOOOOO!