cuties

I read this before and made the mistake of not adding it to my favorites. I totally forgot that you were the author and, in my desperate attempt to find since I wanted to read it again so badly, spent over an hour going through the fanfic archives looking for. Needless to say, I love this story along with a fair share of your work and will now make sure I never have that problem again.

Awesome story, just finished it. However I'm not sure how far in the future is the last chapter. 3 - 5 years?

Imagining... Imagining...
D: it just doesn't have the same sparkle without yoooouuuuu~

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Awwws, cute ending. Took me way too long to finish, but finish I did :D

Yo,

It's me again. Seriously, I squeed so loud my parents yelled at me to keep it down. I ADORE the end. Hehe, Leon's a good cook... He'd never hear the end of it from Zell.

-Ryder

P.S. Nice job of pulling KH, FFVII, & FFVIII together. It was awesomesause. *smirk*

I thought the plot on this was really fun, and the characters were nicely developed.

I admit I kind of didn't like Leon after... chapter 8-ish. Ever since you mentioned that he had the mental development of a 12-year-old, he developed a completely new personality that was giggly, girly (stereotypically), and generally uke-like. I preferred stoic-bastard Leon, who fights for the forces of brotherly love and bromance. :P

I liked the whole array of characters you came up with, though. They were all interesting and unique, but stayed true to their originals most of the time. Very few OOC-moments, which is commendable for a feel-good fic like this.

Congrats for finishing! It takes a lot of time and effort to do that. I'm just a lurker, so anything I say can be defeated with "Well, can you do any better?"

Ciao

Doom

YAYAYAYAYA! New Chapter _ I totally laughed me ass off reading this. So damn funny xD I can't wait till ya post the next one~

loved it! i love how u incorporated so many characters into the story and u gave their individual personalities something extra which was awesome! i loved riku! thought he was awesome in this story! loved the sephiroth and zack pairing, i loved the assignment idea! really interesting, love ur writing style and technique, ur sense of humour is awesome! and was projected really well in this story! especially through the twins, riku and axel! def gna read more of ur fics! overall it was just amazingly awesome! well done! though leon was a little ooc, u still made it work well! cheers for an awesome fic! took me 3 hours to read it and i ended up going to bed at 4am! yay! ]

FINISHED 8D . . .2:09 AM. . . oh well XDokay so um I LOVE IT EVEN MORE NOW loved the sending loved EVERYTHING good flippin job you should be praised man PRAISED. Lol anyways llike i keep on saying it was lovley :3

Okay yeah so im gunna say this now, it's like. . *checks time* 12:36 AM i started reading this fic sevrel hours ago i have not stopped ONCE since i started reading. I love this story so much its not even funny. At the end of this chapter i almost cried it was kinda happy/sad so yeah *sniff* X3. Oh and even though im not done it yet, i would LOVE it if theis story had a sequel of some sorts *nods* And again im just gunna say how truly wonderful this fic is :3 I cant even name all the sêcific things i love about it because theres to many soo yeah tadda

i liked this! it was a really good and funny story. write more

Mm, a satisfying ending. Congrats on another finished fic, dahling!

A) I'm going to kill Cloud for not telling anyone about his condition.

B) I happen to put cheese in a lot of soups I eat, so Leon, you're wrong.

C) I am never getting into a car with Laguna.

D) Leon, you need to stay mad at- or at least make Cloud think you're mad at- Cloud for longer periods of time. Really, you are acting a bit to much like a doormat, and Cloud needs to learn to THINK before he opens that mouth of his.

E) I really like Christine's character. Yay for her taking Cloud down a notch.

F) I agree with Sora and Roxas about Yuffie and Leon plotting, and am going to join them in running away.

G) I haven't read this in far to long if I hadn't reviewed this chapter already.

Well written! Good read!

Well, Leon cries too much, there's way too many pet names, and several parts are overwritten. Other then that, it's pretty cool.