Wow. Definitely NOT what I was expecting - and I mean that in a pleasant way. Naruto really is the strongest (emotionally and mentally). Really, who would put up with what he has?

Anyways, you're just an amazing author. Why can't I be like this with my writing?! *Agonizing cry* Hah.

Am I in the wrong fandom? I've always thought it was Uchiha Sasuke.

awww that's it? noooo...

Now this is something I admire. Inspirational. And Its true, He is the strongest.

I really enjoyed reading this! :D

that was so beautiful! ya kno, in an angst-y, drama-tic way. i luvvved it!

beautiful :)

nicely written.

...that is so sad, but Sakura kicks ass XD I love stories like that, is there any chance youu can do another chapter, I dunno like em...lovey dovey! :D Major SasxSak fan here!

I love it!

really good.

will there be n update?

Ne, ne! Do you think you're going to make a sequel? With Naruto finding Sasuke, and then Sakura saving Naruto from a fatal blow? That would be cool...if you do end up doing that, I'm here with ideas for you! I look forward to more Naruto stories! :D

Hate one-shots like this, makes you want more :D

Wow, this is really different! I really liked it. Sasuke and Sakura were both in character and so were the other team Hebi members. Very well written alternate scenario and I hope you write more fics like this in future! I really want Sasuke and Sakura to encounter each other (alone) in the manga sometime soon, although I know it probably won't happen. But here's to hoping right? Lol.

Does Sasuke's line ''She's mine'' have a double meaning? XD yes as you can totally tell by now I'm a SasuSaku fan lol.

Great work again and thanks for the good read!

That was very good, but there is one mistake that I would like to point out. She is a ninja, yes, but she is a girl. That would make her a kunoichi, not a shinobi.

very well written and in character! i'm a huge sasusaku fan so i was so happy to read this fic! i wish it was sakura who crossed paths with sasuke and his team. if she did it'd play out something like this i think. apart from a few spelling mistakes like sasuke's name, this was very well done. please write more naruto! most writers get characters so out of character but you've done it very well. is there any chance of you writing another one-off fic of sasuke and sakura? i'd be so happy if you did as you write them so well!

thanks for a great read and hope you write more.