This was so cute, thank you for this story :)

Well kinda nice

'I dare you to find out' Damn dude. You killed me, in a blissful way! Loved it! Tyson is just so damn cute, just like a birdie! *wink*

Cute, funny and inspiring! Love how Kai stays in character!

I found this story through Deviant art~ I don't really care for tyson/kai pairings, but this was soo funny! I was dyingggg! funniest thing i've read in a long time! thank you~

Oh my gosh that was hilarious the lap dance thing was so funny lololololololol

This was AWESOMEEEEEE i really loved the end scene was so ... Loved Rays dirty drawing and Tysons lovely fanfic

I loved the whole story it was hilarious and I got to say a good way to do romance.

This is like so awesome to me.. love it.

I don't even like yaoi, but you're such a good writer! I think I'll stalk you and study your mad skillz.

had me laughing.. so hard...loved it

loved it .I wish there were more chapters oh and did I mention I loved it?

"I… like… cute, little birdies….cheep. Cheep."
...LOL xDDDDDDDD because i;ts Kai saying it! Ka! Kai! More people need to hear it!

"Oh! Tyson did you know? I think somebody hacked into your BBA account…" Kenny exclaimed, fingers suddenly a flurry over the keyboard to bring up the hacking in question.
"Urh…" Tyson sputtered.
"Oh no, that sucks!" Hilary shouted, dropping the remote control and putting all her attention on the Chief. "What'd they do?"
"It's um, really strange. Something about a dish-"

..That's where I broke xDDD I can't believe I never read before!

omg.

"Well helloo there, I said, extremely turned on. You look like quite a dish…..how about some dinner?" Tyson laughed and narrated as he typed." - Brilliant! I'm dying laughing xDDDD

poor ray! I imagin him sitting in the corner sulking like a kitten xD

Please write the rest!