But the Slytherins dorms are in the dungeon. Old Dumbledork knows that.

Aww...this is so cute. I really do wish that these disgusting Muggle treated Harry this way originally. Thank you for the amazing chapter.

Please continue it is one of the best fics out there.

Please update

doesn't really make sense, he's really close to Dudley but dudley still acts the same?

oohh..can jot wait to see the prank..n dumbledore loosing his powers..muahahaha

I look forward to your next update.

Hope this story is continuing its brilliant

Please continue this story. I really love it!

Honestly, if you're just going to copy the text from the books, at least put some asterisks on it so I know where to skip.

Good good

What is the wand made of

I certainly hope that you some how found your muse again, and that you will update this story soon. I am an avid fan of this story, I started it 12 hrs ago and finished it just now. Your ideas are unique, and so completely different that I feel compelled to bed you to continue writing this story.

... The Slytherin common room is in the dungeons...

You have some unique ideas and I am enjoying your plot progression, but you have some major issues keeping the tense of your writing consistent. Are you trying to tell the story in the past or the present? You need to pay more attention to your verb tenses; you are mixing past and present tense, often in the same sentence, and this makes your writing very hard to follow.

Keep writing! Your writing can only improve if you pay more attention to every single word you type. Try reading what you have written out loud; that will often bring to light any inconsistencies.

Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction.