LMAO! Navi was annoying, I wish I could have gotten a fly swatter anytime in Ocarina of Time xD

Yay updateage XD

Oh some water fun I see! And I wonder whats going on with Kyle here?... He seems to have something planned! Something that will lead to much angst? Please say it will lead to drama between our two boys, cause we all know the wonderful secks that can come from that XD

always good to see a bit of yumminess in each chapter hehe

hmm i don't know who that was who made an appearance... Oddly I kept thinking of ''Crash bandacoot" or whatever his name is XD is that weird or what lol.

still very curious about whats with Kyle ;p

and always, looking forward to more ;)

Snake!

Twas a good chapter, I liked it.

AMAZINGLY AWESOME CHAPTER! I luved it! I'm dying to know what happend to Kyle when he was talking to someone in his head by the oasis! D:

Yay a new chappy :D

When you said you were gonna write more, I didn’t expect it so soon! But hey, I’m not complaining, not at all hehe.

Oh and what a great way to start off a chapter after a long break! Nice and delicious ;)

Hehe I love that little romantic, and deep kind of speech Kyle did too. I could so see him doing, well, saying something like that! More of a way to win Stan over and get him to do what HE wants XD

Oh I am SO glad you added these two in it! One of the luckiest finds ever, discovering the Romeo and Juliet anime!

And wow, they’re just as lovey dovey with each other as Stan and Kyle are! XD

I love how Kyle love’s anime XD

Man I would die of joy like him being in the “anime province” talk about a dream come true lol.

Haha I’m surprised they didn’t figure out who they were earliar XD

Oh, and what is with my poor Kyle getting dizzy like that D:

Their bedding situation sure sounded nice though, and I’m surprised they actually just went to sleep and that is it lol, especially with the whole naked situation and the nice, soft silk sheets ;)

Haha well it took them long enough to figure out who they were! But it was worth it to put Kyle in a ‘good’ mood ;) I bet he’s damn fun to be around like that hehe.

So glad to see this updated, and seriously can’t wait for more ;D

Love it Dear

awesome chapter! LUVVED IT!

Nice story, pretty fun to read.

And yeah, that would be pretty much everyone's thoughts of Navi.

YAY

CHAPPY TWO~!

I was so happy to see this when I checked my email when I got home, was all "OH :D" XD

ANYWAYS

hehehe okay, Bill-Board, thats so cute... I dunno why, but I find that adorable! I see him/it looking like a giant candy cane for some reason XD

I can't think where he is from though... Did you make him up? Well either way, he's still cute in my mind XD

Aw the wee little pixies! He sounds SO cute! Though again I can't think where he would be from... But, at a guess knowing you ;p... Zelda?... XD

Aw them sitting by an oak tree! That part is SO cute~! I love fluffiness like that! Aren't they just the cutest!

Lol and the fairy interupting them, aw, how annoying but thats still SO cute~!

I have no idea who they are... I wanna know! DD: lol

Oh they're off again, where to next I wonder ;p

I THINK I know what part to do... But have to finish 'another' pic first ;)

AWESOMENESS

hehe, it was the fairy from Zelda, I forget her name. But yeah, she is really annoying.

Really cute! I like Stan and Kyle's interactions, which is weird, because I usually don't enjoy established relationships as much as getting-together stories, but I think this will be a good one. I'm looking forward to the more smutty and romantic scenes you talk about. Keep it up!

yeah! so cute! hooray for more smut and romance!

Yay, an update!

HAHA, the sign made me laugh. "Bill Board" lol XDD.

Omg, that was so cool how u made a manga, anime village! Lol, it's like the China town of Imagination land! Although, it's actually japanese, so i guess not exactly, lol.

And when they said, 'heroes return' my geeky little mind thought kind of like Zelda for some reason XD.

So I was gonna ask who that fairy was, but now I have to guess, don't I? Hmm.. was it Navi? XDD. Haha, I know the game's on my mind at the moment, so it's most likely not right. But still, it makes sense! She's always like "Listen..." or "Wake up..." or "Hello...". That's about ALL she says, actually, come to think of it, lol... Anyway, if I'm wrong, I'd still like to know who the fairy was.

Dude, this is so much fun to read! It got me so hyper right now. It's so creative. I really like it. And what makes it even better, of COURSE, is the StanXKyle slash-ie goodness! I can't wait for the romantic, smut parts. Got me anxious for the next chap!

Anyway, update soon!

Peace Out!:P

PS

StanXKyle4eva!XD

Great job so far Cant wait for the next update

very creative! :D and CUTE!

Great stuff. You've got a pretty unique idea here and I think this story is definitely going to end well.

Only critique is on a bit of the writing. You use "..." way too much for both characters, it should only be in moderation, really. It's a common mistake you see all over this site, but it does get annoying after a while.

And in this phrase: “Well...it’s the answer that means that we can get on with celebrating our anniversary in...as you put it...a “memorable” way...”

Memorable wouldn't be emphasised with "", because those are for speech. It would be 'memorable'.

Also, after '...', you need to capitalize the first letter as if it were the beginning of a sentence, because it is.

My last comment would be on the use of 'teehee', because it really seems out of place. Traditionally, you could just put 'Kyle/Stan giggled' rather than actually putting teehee.

In short, I think this story has great potential and I've added it to my Story Alert list. Update soon!