Reviews for Paradise Lost |
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![]() ![]() I WILL NEVER BELIEVE THAT DANIEL IS IS AS BAD AS HE 'THE GOOD LIFE' GUYS |
![]() ![]() YOU ARE IDIOT |
![]() ![]() I luv ur stories princessm! |
![]() ![]() Ahh! I hate daniel! Can he just give it arrest i mean musa would never fall for a stupid guy like him! |
![]() ![]() Good... Nice. Aren't u writing any thing after good life. I read it , ite nice |
![]() ![]() Can u write stories like forever they r really amazing yr better then rhold dale |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, I liked it :-) |
![]() ![]() This is by far one of my favorite fan fiction stories EVER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story so much it had me filled with humor and antipiction though I had to admit I wanted to smack Dan down at first but he grew on me but I'm still on team Riven :) |
![]() ![]() I really loved all your chapters! :] |
![]() ![]() Should write more its good |
![]() ![]() Best story ever I read that 5 times because it was good |
![]() ![]() You are such a great writer you should write more musa and riven fanfics I'm definitely a fan ️ |
![]() ![]() It's a great story, and I love the idea, but I think you need to check your grammar and spelling sometimes. There are a *lot* of mistakes that can get tiresome to read over. Also, I really like your other characters, but I don't think you should have introduced so many of them especially at one time, because it can get confusing with who's dating/related to who, etc. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! |