Reviews for Paradise Lost
Guest chapter 10 . 5/30/2016
I WILL NEVER BELIEVE THAT DANIEL IS IS AS BAD AS HE 'THE GOOD LIFE' GUYS
Guest chapter 10 . 5/30/2016
YOU ARE IDIOT
Samantha chapter 13 . 3/28/2015
I luv ur stories princessm!
Samantha chapter 7 . 3/28/2015
Ahh! I hate daniel! Can he just give it arrest i mean musa would never fall for a stupid guy like him!
Guest chapter 13 . 2/8/2015
Good... Nice. Aren't u writing any thing after good life. I read it , ite nice
Guest chapter 13 . 1/5/2015
Can u write stories like forever they r really amazing yr better then rhold dale
MissCassidy.D chapter 13 . 8/8/2014
Nice, I liked it :-)
Kalei chapter 13 . 7/15/2014
This is by far one of my favorite fan fiction stories EVER!
Tauguste5 chapter 13 . 6/8/2014
I loved this story so much it had me filled with humor and antipiction though I had to admit I wanted to smack Dan down at first but he grew on me but I'm still on team Riven :)
Anele chapter 13 . 6/8/2014
I really loved all your chapters! :]
Guest chapter 13 . 4/28/2014
Should write more its good
Guest chapter 13 . 12/28/2013
Best story ever I read that 5 times because it was good
Mayra chapter 13 . 11/2/2013
You are such a great writer you should write more musa and riven fanfics I'm definitely a fan ️
Chickensmoothie1 chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
It's a great story, and I love the idea, but I think you need to check your grammar and spelling sometimes. There are a *lot* of mistakes that can get tiresome to read over. Also, I really like your other characters, but I don't think you should have introduced so many of them especially at one time, because it can get confusing with who's dating/related to who, etc.
LoganLerman135 chapter 12 . 8/23/2012
Aww!
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