I have to say I'm disappointed that Harry didn't think to use his elemental powers in the most likely easiest way to beat everyone but a vampire. Take away the air around them so they cant breathe and he wins. Or turn the air they are breathing into Carbon Dioxide knocking them out. Or just control the air in their lungs and tear the lungs apart.

I am disgusted. Yeah, I was so caught up in the moment that my other son LL die so I decided to transfer magic and possibly kill you . I m so sorry come home Harry forgives and smile

hurry pls it's been a damn decade since you've updated :c

I know it has been 10 years but this truly an amazing story! You probably won't be continueing it because it has been 10 years. Although you really have an amazing skill with writing!

PLEASE CONTINUE LIKE LEGIT THIS IS MY FAVORITE STORY I AM SHOCKED THAT THE ENTIRE WORLD HASN'T READ THIS! 0w0

im really glad they are not evil

Hi, I know it's been a long time but I ask that you please Cary on this story. It is an amazing plot and cannot wait for more

Don't abandon please!

People care! Don't stop

Hihi, please continue your story! IT is a really imaginative Plot and written absolutely wonderful 3

This book had a great idea and plot, but the execution was a little off. I don't like how op harry was when I read this, but Adam was definitely my favorite character.

Noooooo, you have to come back and update, I needs to know what happens next!

Brilliant, brilliant writing here honey! I adore this fic and the AMAZING characters you have created here! ;o)

this is rather low quality lol

Chokes.
Im guessing this is an evil dumbly fic.
I know harry started hogwarts afew chapters ago, but anacong to the ebtire school harrys a squib is just plain dangerus and him finding amuzment in his torment. Ah.

Adam le tiro tremendo insulto a lily jajajajaja