Reviews for Personal
Bohogal1998 chapter 27 . 1/14/2018
Good! They're all ok!
Bohogal1998 chapter 19 . 1/14/2018
WHAT ARE YOU DOING!? How can ya DO this to the team?!
sunshine21409 chapter 27 . 11/25/2016
What a read. The tiva was not too bad
Guest chapter 9 . 4/22/2016
It's hard to understand chapter 9 when one sentence is in the hospital and the next is in Mexico
dweenamarie chapter 3 . 4/26/2011
The drug dealer's name is Pedro Hernandez. In a later episode, I can't remember which one but after Rule 51, his daughter Palerma Reynosa (head of the Reynosa Cartel) and his son (can't remember his name) try to get revenge.
DuchessofYork chapter 27 . 4/24/2011
man, i LOVED it! they should turn this in an episode...lol ;)
charli chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
got as far as, oh chapter 14 or 15...soon as it turned Tiva, it turned my stomach... checking out on the rest of this story...and too bad, it was a good one so far
alix33 chapter 15 . 2/10/2009
"As they were being loosened Abby opened her eyes. Gibbs was the first person she saw, but she didn’t smile, or wrap her arms around him. “Do I know you mister?”" - OK, Gibbs is going to freak out ('cause I'm practically doing that), and I'm not at all sure that's an entirely good thing.
alix33 chapter 7 . 2/10/2009
"As Ducky arrived in Timothy’s room, he was met by a slew of doctors. One in particular met him at the door. “How is he?” “Well, Doctor, you’ll be pleased to hear, there was no need to amputate. We were able to repair the damaged tissue further, and the infection has begun to run its course…" - Thank God! I was not looking forward to my poor boy McGee having yet another challenge to overcome!
Zaza chapter 6 . 12/8/2008
Nifty story in general, but you may want to change one thing in Chapter 6 - Tony is very fluent in Spanish.
unique.and.proud chapter 27 . 11/3/2008
WOW...wow...

*sits in stunned silence*

Fell asleep last night, and am currently still sitting in bed ill and I decided I had to, just had to read this story :) It is so amazing, I was so absorbed in the story I didn't think I could take the time to review each chaptr, it was bad enough as it was having to wait a few seconds for each chapter to load when I moved on - once or twice I even threatened my laptop with a brick through the screen ;)

Having said that I did absolutely love the story and I know how much you enjoy feedback so I can, if you want, go through and tell you all my favourite bits from the story! ... that'll be some fun reading for you :D
Enthusiastic Fish chapter 27 . 5/29/2008
If anyone ever accuses me of torturing my characters, I'll just point them to this story and say "See? I'm not bad at all!" ;D Very nice.
kim chapter 27 . 4/7/2008
Oh my god! Your fic was freaking awesome! I love the bond that the team shares and wow! Great job! One of my fav fics for sure!
ScarsLikeVelvet chapter 27 . 3/17/2008
Woah...you had me clearly in tears a couple of times, while I was reading this. I still got goosebumps from the last chapter, when they are all reunited. Poor fellows all injured and hurt, but now they are back together and getting well again. *smiles*

I really like this fiction so...yeah...I hope you write more of this stuff.
sn855850 chapter 27 . 2/16/2008
This is a wonderful story and you did a great job writing the story. I am sad to see the story end too, but they all must come to an end. Great job.
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