That argument was so beautiful...()

Oh...My...GOD! YES *SAYS YES A MILLION TIMES*

Donnie and Leo are actually my least favorite Turtles, but you captured Donnie's and Leo's character here so beautifully that I have to give kudos. Nice!

I read everything in one sitting. Well-written.

Omg. I can't even believe it. That was beautiful!im crying..and can't stop the tears!I need that sequel

Hey! Awesome chapter! Intense! Cant wait to read the rest!

Poor Donnie

SO FUKING ADORABLE!
well done expressing Don's emotions. I'm impressed :)

So cute! I'm so happy for them!

I have a similar story, I would love to hear your opinion about it! Forget Me Never is the title, I would greatly appreciate!

Aww, angsty Donnie is so cute! Hehe, I just love an angst-ridden 'falling in love' story *sigh*.

As a bit of constructive crit for any future turtle love stories, it did seem a bit off that Leo didn't bring up the species difference. I mean, if Don wasn't crushing on one of his bros, that'd mean he loved someone who isn't a mutant turtle (and might not want to get intimate with a reptile). I'd think a human/turtle relationship would be a bigger taboo than being gay (though I can see incest being the biggest taboo).

Anyway, I totally adore the Raph/Don pairing, and shall go enjoy the rest of this lovely story... I do hope there's a happy ending, Donnie deserves some lovin' after all this emotional turmoil...

awwww this was beautiful - very well written :)

It always nice to find a love story that is A. decent, B. has detail and C. is actually finished. I really like this. It was worth searching for. Love it. Well done.

D'Awwwwwww~ ain' that cute? its realy sweet i half cryed at the end...and ya realy gave me a half heart attack with leo bablin' it out...XD

Oh my gosh! just love it!

and belive me my dear, you wrote it right...im a real nerd and its kinda how i reacted when i got my first serious crush...ok i didn' fallen in love with my bro or my sis... but ya get the point... its nice writte i like it!

So cute! And so well-written. Lovely. You have quite a talent for articulating profound and intense emotions.