This was really sweet. I kinda like the idea of Renting contemplating poetry and Rukia.

Beautiful and sweet. :)

Absolutely Brilliant! You have a gift!

That's so poetic... I love the way Renji tried to find the words to describe Rukia. Good job.

I have read the story earlier, and just some days ago I was thinking how good it was. It is just so... Renji.

Nah, I think I will just add you my favourite authors :)

Sweet.

Very well done; good job, good luck!

I find it quite amusing that here Renji says he isn't a poet, but then he launches into very poet like sentences.

It's very Renji, not quite seeing what's behind everything.

I am such a sucker for Renji POV fics - especially when it concerns Rukia - and this had to be the most beautiful one I've read yet. That poetry/sweat analogy is so perfect and *so* Renji I'd be tempted to sing your praises all day long, but this story demands several re-readings and I'm fairly sure I'll turn to stupid dreamy girly goo in the process... must push submit review button... before the goo takes effect... urk...

That's really sweet and beautiful. I love how Renji has a lot of depth that he just doesn't or can't show on the outside, but you know it's there. Great job!

Beautiful. You have done a wonderful job writing on Renji's feelings. I love it, keep it up.