Update motherfucker

This plots is original and appealing. I have read several of your many fictions. This is a early one and you have become a wonderful writer. There are so few Dante x Patty fictions even though there is a good number of shipers. I'm begging you to edit this fic...your story line is golden it's just a little grammaticaly ruff in parts. Hell i'll edit it for you!Give this store new llife please please please with strawberrys on top. Patty Dante fans need a good read!

great story 3 could have been longer though :P try to fix some spelling problems, they make the story difficult to read.. the pair and the story are wonderful, keep going ;)

great story love it

nice like the ending

Great fanfiction. Unfortuneatly I can smell bullshit from a mile away and I smell Twilight crap here

i really like this stoy its really good

oh i loved it

PLEASE UPDATE! I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!

Update soon!

great story though i wish it was maybe 50 more chapters than this short thing.

i mean i have other stories that three times longer than this.

to say the least i like it (still wish it was longer).

next time you write a story please the next time you write a story let it long and a lot of chapters.

i liked this! i've always wanted to see a dante/patty story!

Hmm. I would love to completely renovate this. There's alot grammar and spelling problems that kept slapping me in the face, except some parts were just written perfectly. Dante and Patty are just so cute together. Thanks, ~

-T.M

I really like the story. its one of the ONLY with pattyxdante but the last couple of chapters have had a LOT of typos and errors in grammar. i am not really one to talk but it makes it difficult to read. Some work editing and a proof reader adn it should be fine. _ keep up the work!

Dante's a Pedo? I must say, this initial relationship is reminiscent of Louis and whatever the hell the little gal's name is in Interview with the Vamp. I got to go read the rest now.