Too quick to anger if she truly is a woman that has been exposed to the harsh realities of life. She would have long grown used to being looked down upon for being female.

You should probably put that it’s Murtagh centric on the bio

Decently written story. While you had Eragons personality in the beginning, you lost it fairly quickly. The time line had you past Dras Leona, where Eragon killed. And in the Hadarac Desert, he wouldn't have reacted that way. All in all, a good story with a few minor plot twists.

Seriously dude. Good story. But you really need to stop making eragon look like a damn pussy every damn chapter. He's a goddamn rider he's more of a baddass than those other two shitheads

good story. My only disagreement is you portraying eragon as a piece of shit

Wow. Just, wow.

I was crying when they died you evil person you! ;)

Sista, this had to be done.

I decided to restart reading your story and review all the chapters I didn't review last time. I have to say this is still as awesome as I remembered. I love the way you write so much!

This and the first chapter were a great introduction. I love how you make it clear that Murtagh and Lia do not like each other *winks*

Saphira is awesome, as always hehe Not sure when I'll read the next chapter, but you'll know when you get a review ;-)

This story was fucking awesome. Your chapters are hugeee, but I guess it's because of all the back and forth dialog, which is really fun. It seems like you really stuck to the themes of Inheritance, except in this you made Eragon out to be who he probably would have been in "reality": a scared little boy. Lia is a really awesome OC. I feel like this almost could've ended after the battle in Farthen Dur. From there on, the story feels somewhat forced, but I will admit that it doesn't stray too far. I suppose a fanfic this good deserves to kill Galbatorix in its own ironic way. Oops, spoiler. Probably my favorite fanfic thus far. Thanks so much for the work.

AH-MAH-Ziiinnngg! One of the best IC fics i've ever read. Your OCs are credible, they got a deep developped personality and the interactions between the characters is realistic. Else than Eragon being a bit OOC, i think this fic is bordering perfection. Definitily a favorite.

Sorry but i just HAD to give you your 100th reveiw on this ff lol, it is amizing after all, this is the third time i have read it and i have to say it is my fav ff EVER i realy love it, thanx for writing it! it must have taken ages! I hope you had as much fu writing it as i did reading it, its funny and just amaizing in general! thax!

Josi

WOAW You don't know many times I jumped around my seat after finishing this story XD

That was really great!

From the start I was really captivated and until the last chapter never once I felt bored!

this is really the best story I've ever read!

Great ending! I love you for making this wonderful story!

TT *cries in happiness*

You're officially my fave author!

OMG that was really sad T_T

When jacob died..

And.. and what would happen next?

I mean... don't let anyone die again T_T

Waw, that was a long chapter!

And that was great XD

I laughed several times lol... XD

Hey can you believe this? I'm 2 chapters more to the end!

Wow~! Ths is the first time I could finish a story with 30 chapters this fast lol!

AW~! How I loved the ending XDD

Lia and Murtagh are definitely made for each other XD

It was really touching, and you mixed the humour and the tension very well.

It almost made me cry XD

Great chapter again!