This is angsty and very funny. Good job

this isn’t bad so far but putting a break between each scene is sorely needed. Everything seems like it runs together.

This has been a whirlwind of a crazy plot but wow! Just wow. What is Itachi going to do? What is Sasuke's father gonna do? Oh goodness. I think more skirts are in Naruto's future.

Nice

I really enjoyed this story. And am happy that even though it seems you intended more it is a pretty good ending. Like Naruto and Itachi need to make up, but given everything it dossnt seem like that would be a stretch. I read the entire story in one day I just couldn't put it down. Thank you for writing this!

it's been years but this was a great fic and it makes me sad seeing that there probably won't be any more updates.

for God sake child! stop objectifying yourself!

yas! angry itachi is the best itachi

I know this is leading up to the Sasuke in a skirt fetish, but it really makes me sad how much he's objectifying himself for a person who treats him like shit, especially after he had that strong moment.

Please please please please continue this fic. I know it’s been so many years now but I want to know the story about Naruto’s mom so much. At least could you summarize the story you had in mind. Pleaseee

please update

Also, this is because I read the other reviews and it was irritating.

So everyone has their right to say whatever opinions they have. I get it. But this is also fabrication. Who cares if it’s not exactly canon or if gestures were different. Again, this is fanfic. It was also mentioned in the first place that Naruto was going to be more dominant in the relationship.

So all this out of character bullshit is just plain bullshit. If you’re reading the story, take the time to appreciate the DAMN good writing.

I can honestly say that I’ve binged re-read this fix over and over again! And I will continue to because I love your interpretation of these characters. I love how you displayed all the different relationships of all the characters to each other. That you took the time to identify all of the insecurities of the characters. The determination of Sasuke. The realization of Naruto.

Everything about this fic is And was great! Even if you don’t continue this story or even finish it. I would like to thank you for even taking the time to express everything for us.

Gahhhh! It’s been years! I know you have a plan but it’s torture not knowing! Please please please don’t let this be the end!

I want to start off saying that this fic is a rollercoaster of feelings and I'm sooo glad I got on! I can't wait for the next chapters to come and finish this out! Your writing style is extremely enjoyable and the smut scenes are delicious~ a little request if you don't mind? Maybe a neji x garra fic? I love that pair and your writing style would definitely create an intoxicating story! xoxo

OMG i want to read the next chapter. I always tell myself to only read completed fanfictions but this one was just so freaking interesting. Hope you can get inspired again and give this fanfic another chapter ;)