I loved it, still though, there could have been a little ramoce, like cassandra could have been older and Jedah could have fallen for her. But that is just me. I loved the fanfic.

Cool cool *smiles*

nice story...we would like to see more of this...keep up the good work.

wow cool _ You are soo good a storyteller and writer and stuff yayy

Not bad. An amusing little tidbit. All the characters were well portrayed, and it looks like if it were continued, it could be a sort of darkstalkers Jedah Saga. I'd be interested in seeing where this is going.

-the collector of data-

Very well written, and this is actually very engaging. Definitely something you should consider continuing... If you're still in the mood to do so.

You know what I think? I think it's bad that people don't like Darkstalkers so much. If they did like Darkstalkers, they wouldn't miss stories as good as this; great fic.

Ishy-sama! *Blinks rubs her eyes* Ishy-sma! *Waves!* It's Malak... *remembers her lack of updates on VM.* ... Uhm... heh! Ingore me. (kidding!)

This is a very good story, well written, interesting setting, all in all, a great Darkstalkers fic. I read it quite some time ago somewhere else; it must have been in vampire mussings; since it's the only place I know that holds Darkstalkers fics; It's good to see this story here.