this is one of the most horrendous pieces of fanfics ever created

lol pacce is still a fucking child 13 years later

the rest is fun service with bad writing and terrible dialogues like they were written by a 10 yo

Nice description of Armor Break.
Ever so intrigued by the identity of the new Sin, and if it's Yuna, how she managed that. Probably Lulu, though.
Damn, the nimble-fingered thing sounds dirty right after that flash-back.

That's an interesting start you have there.

Hello once again!

I am still here after a few years, still eagerly reading your prose, and still eagerly awaiting the ending chapters. I love the much-needed character interactions/respite of these last few chapters. (I have a strong idea of who this "loose end" is , but I'm keeping it to myself.)

I enjoy your writing as always. It's evident throughout that you've had a plan and stuck to it. The battle with Sin REALLY FELT like a Final Fantasy superboss, and these last few chapters have been absolutely wonderful. I see you haven't updated in a year. I just wanted to encourage you: I have stuck to this story, and I still check back your profile every now and again to see if there are any updates.

Oddly, like a video game I have put down and picked up again, this story has followed me through many changes in my offline life. I started it as I was just graduating high school, when there were only five chapters written. Now, I am one semester away from getting my degree, with only a few promised chapters left. I encourage you to finish this story, if you are still working on it. If nothing else, I would love to see this finished for my own nostalgia's sake. Please keep writing!

This is a beautiful story. Truly beautiful.

From the use of language, to the character depiction and development; from the imagery and detailed descriptions of both battles and situations, to the underlying plot and the elements of both X and X-2 that you have so gracefully knitted together, this story is truly a work of art.

I should apologize for not reviewing sooner, or perhaps for not possessing words adequate to describe this masterpiece, but I had been rendered speechless.

You have done a wonderful job with this story. Your imagination and writing skills are impeccable. Not once during the course of the story did I think that this is a piece of fanfiction, and not an actual Final Fantasy game.

Congratulations is too shallow a word to praise your accomplishment here, but alas it's the only one available, so I'll leave you with it. Congratulations. Thank you for sharing this story with the world.

Just, one thing.

Please. Update SOON. This is one of the best fics I've ever read and.. you can't just LEAVE me here D: XD I'm kidding, I'm kidding, but I hope so.

Ahhhh terrific, a new chapter and pleasant at that. The plot-twist was unexpected, but mainly thought provoking as well. I can't wait to see what else you have in store with this gem of a story and hope you have others in mind once you have finished.

Au revoir

I usually go by debi6988 or finalfantasy876 here on FFNET, just wanted to say that I just finished chapter 49 & wow! This is by far one of the best fanfics for FFX that I've read in a long time & I've read quite a few over the years. Hoping to see an update soon, have the story bookmarked on my phone. ;) Good job!

Okay...did you repost this a second time since last night? Because I could have sworn that I read this chapter already. Not that I mind, since this story is so awesome, but it did kinda throw me off a bit. And the bomb you just dropped has definitely got me wanting to see what happens next!

Flippin' love this fic, an update always makes my day. Thank you!

Sin is reforming? :O

Didn't think that was possible. I guess someone forgot to Send Yu Yevon...

Well, they had better Send him this time. And get rid of Yunalesca too, while they're at it!

Another great chapter showing Lulu beginning to recover from her ordeal as Sin...

Vandevere

Oh God what can I say. This was masterfully written. It had me riveted from chapter one. I have no appropriate words to convey the awe and amazement I have at this story.I WISH that this could have been made into a dlc or something for ffx. Thank you so much for feeding my Auron obsession.

A very, very late review, but I have to say I love your opening chapter. It does a great job of introducing some of the canon elements of Spira that were altered in your AU. And it does so without info-dumping or any otherwise jarring approach to stage setting. I find the subtlety of it very well-done! The pacing is also quite good with a balance between description and dialogue, and the chapter ends on just the right note. I can't wait to see the events unfold in your what-if scenario.

On to chapter two! xD

I'm glad this story is over,

Amazing. Didn't want it to end, I love reading all your stories about Auron and Lulu. Just amazing. )