I like your explinations for how all the "magic/chakra" works. very cool

thank you for writing this great fic. although i dont think passing out from nosebleeds constantly is very healthy haha

I keep hoping for an eventual update to this, but.. it's unlikely by this point.

That said, I do appreciate what I've read.

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Fantastic.

not sure if the author is still around or just stopped making fanfics or had a really long writters block but so far it is original and has proven to be interesting i hope you continue the fic thank you for posting this wonderfull fic

This was great, I have no idea why it is not more popular.

Realy good story, I wish it's not on hiatus/abandoned...

and he was never heard from again.

I'm guessing you don't really mess with this story anymore, but I just wanted to say that I found it very interesting. You do an incredible job at expanding the naruto universe. I hope you someday find an opportunity to come back to this story.

i would like to protest something naruto is not the kyubiis jailor hes its prison it doesnt have a jailor aside from the chakra construct of minato and kushina

Really funny chapter. Hope to see the next ones soon

Totally love this and Recca! Hopefully you'll start updating again.

It's really too bad that this one hasn't been touched in five years, because you've got a lot of really great things going on with it. Your world-building is top notch, the characters are engaging, and I absolutely *love* the idea of sarin no jutsu.