Ugh, it says you have two chapters, but the other one isn't up yet. Oh well. I love it so far, and I can't wait till Fanfiction gets it act together, and I can read chapter two. Yes, this plot is rather cliche, but it's just so darn fun! Right? Aw, poor Ron. I can't wait to see why him and Hermione didn't work out. And using Dumbledore as the Christmas past? Never would have thought that. I wonder who the Christmas present and future is going to be... Hopefully you use Malfoy for one of them. (I don't know, I just think it would be funny to see Malfoy as one of Ron's ghost.) I also hope you do something different for the future, instead of Ron seeing a tombstone with his name on it, and something like 'Loved by no one' - I know that's how the story goes, but I don't know... I just don't think Ron would be all that fazed by that. Whatever, your story, lol. Anyway, it was very well-written, and I can't wait to read more! Good job. _