Reviews for Hush Puppy
Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Hush puppy. OK. SSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
XxXBlackPhoenixXxX chapter 3 . 7/28/2010
Good story, can't wait to read more!

Did you get the list of countries that Duck said from the song:

The nations of the world from the Animaniacs?

The song starts with United states, Canada, Mexico, Panama, Haiti, Jamaica, Peru...
Evilhumour Author chapter 3 . 6/29/2010
Very good. NOt expecting this from a K story, but do contiune.
Leepet chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
Ooh the intrigue is terrible! It's exciting, tension-filled, and let's not forget- well written.

So far- you get an A for the writing. The beginning from the point of view of Slam was just awesome. Do you mind if I use that style for writing Slam in my story? That part had me laughing out loud. L.O.L.

I cannot wait until the next chapter. But if it takes awhile - that's okay. I know the horror of trying to write in your spare time. Ugh.

Awesome job. Just make sure you finish the story someday!

Incredible.

P.I.M.
Leepet chapter 2 . 2/4/2009
victuals You get 10 points for using a cool word. Good Job.

Okay, Mastermind's speech with all the different dog references - awesome.

This is turning out really well. The writing is really good considering I'm not too annoyed by not knowing what's really going on.

Oh! And 'Nova Bucks' I get it! lol But what's with the Hush Puppy thing? Will we ever know?
Leepet chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
Wow, such an awesome first chapter. I love the whole scene with Tech and Mallory with the containment field - "lab partner" lol. I really want to know what the Hush Puppy bit was about. I hope you reveal that later.

I thought Mallory was in character. It makes sense that she wasn't completely evil at the beginning.

Great job. Now onto the next chapter.
ontheair chapter 3 . 2/1/2009
Please...more!
NWCobalt chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
Very nice. I was hoping to come across some good stories about ole Tech-E's previous aquaintence with Mallory "Mastermind" Casey. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Yunno chapter 3 . 1/5/2009
Oh WOW! Thank you for continuing this story. This story of yours was one of my favorites when I first found this website last spring. I had given up hope. I’m very interested in how Tech plans to take down Mallory. And I really like the way you portray Slam’s speech.
bunnyloverforever chapter 3 . 1/3/2009
Pretty good story, I understood it. Not many mistakes.

REV NEEDS MORE SCREN TIME!

Lol. I'm a total Rev fan, hence the RevxTech fanfiction I made a while back. Make more, it's good.
Ishgone chapter 2 . 1/24/2008
I like it so far.

Very interesting...

Do continue! _;
Capital-C chapter 2 . 1/16/2008
I like the opening scene to this chapter, as well as how the story seems to be going in general. Also, there was a number of good lines in this chapter. Here's my top three.

1 “For all we know, she could be smarter than you.”

Tech narrowed his eyes. “Don’t put words in my mouth,” he reprimanded her.

(Cute, really shows Lexi's rascally side and Tech's sort of older brother type relationship with her and the others.)

2 “This isn’t vacation, Duck,” Lexi chided.

Duck rolled his eyes. “Pfft! Says you. You don’t have to be present for the royal bath time every five hours.”

(Danger makes a really good point here. Plus it's funny.)

3 “Then let’s do some price-checking for tonight’s dinner.”

(That's just the sort of thing Ace might say. And a great way to end the chapter. Well done)
Champion of Justice chapter 2 . 1/9/2008
Great chapter. please update soon. i wonder what mastermind is planning.
myfinalrequiem chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Haha! My computer works! I can start reviewing again! This is such an awesome start you have here. It sounds like it fits in well with the original series plot line. Looking forward to your next update!

~CK13~
Capital-C chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Solid writing so far. I’ll have to keep my eye on this one.
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