Reviews for My Best Friend, the Player
valentina.delafuente chapter 12 . 9/13/2019
Me encanta
vampirelady13 chapter 5 . 6/15/2019
Wow door mat Bella is in the house.
Rinoa17FFVIII chapter 2 . 11/9/2018
I think I was drunk writing that first review lol. There’s no way she could mix up beer and punch. I don’t see how she would ever mix those two up. They smell/taste totally different.
Rinoa17FFVIII chapter 1 . 11/9/2018
How the hell does it should know the difference between punch and beer? Those two test nothing a like.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/29/2018
Ya that made perfect sense didn't it. Bella does whatever her friends say and whatever her friends say is "good" for the story.

Ya bella, like you don't have a choice you like totally have to go with Edward...cause the writer wants to push you guys together duh! Ya I know its not being done naturally and it feels REALLY forced but like what evs.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/29/2018
Like omg...I like felt something when like I kissed my best friend...like a spark or something...OMG I'm like never gonna be love struck by him... LIke never, except for like 2 chapters from now.

This is really fucking juvenile.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/29/2018
OF course she kissed him...even though she has NO feelings for him what so ever...LOL

Shes fucking transparent and this kinda sucks
Guest chapter 2 . 5/29/2018
What was the point of chapter 2? Strange to have FILLER this early on. Do you not have a plot and story line?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
If his behavior disgusted her so much she wouldn't be friends like him. That's it, point blank.

We already know she thinks hes hot and has a perfect body, so we also know that it will only be a matter of time for her to start pining after him like everyone else. Why would anyone want a used up whore? Theres literally billions of men in the world, pass over the used up manwhores!
Guest chapter 12 . 11/4/2017
AY AY AY!
Fluffyrainbow23 chapter 12 . 1/10/2017
Other than a few typos i really loved this story its so sweet!
Guest chapter 12 . 12/17/2016
This was amaaaazing
Luv ya
Guest chapter 12 . 11/24/2016
I LOVED THIS STORY! IT WAS SOO GOOD!
Guest chapter 9 . 10/24/2016
Since you're 'correcting' might I point out you have numerous mistakes. Spelling and grammar. Who doesn't know how to spell 'of course' and 'whining'?
Tan r chapter 7 . 10/24/2016
Lol this story is extremely fast paced. I'm guessing you're a young teen writer. Pretty good for a teen. You clearly don't realise how boys REFUSE to call anything love until they have to. It's stange how Edward tossed out the word 'love' just a day after making out with someone else in front of his 'love'.
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