It's a good story, I hope to read more stories this good, greetings, see you, bye!

It is impressive how you ended up with three fics spanning 1.2 million words on whay you felt was a oneshot.

I like this story so far keep it up

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This was great can't wait to to read the next one.

I would like to apologize for my terrible behaviour

Awesome story yuo are a real fan of naruto awesome awesome awesome thanks for keeping ma entertained

Awesome story but you don't capture Naruto and saskes character

how old are hinata and naruto right now?

I just finished reading this story and I thought it was a really good story for the most part. I did hate the fact that it felt like for every good thing that happened to Naruto something bad or really bad ended up happening to take that away from him. I’m not saying that it did I’m just saying that it feels like it did. I’ll read the next story for this soon as well.

Hey Marchgirl!
I decided to reread your Naruto stories to pass the time until I could find something else to read on here, cause their my favorites at the moment!
But I had a question and I don't remember if I asked you or not, so here it is: Are you going to pair Itachi with anyone? Cause he needs someone, dang it! Everyone else has someone, and he needs more than a talking cat! (Also spoilers to anyone who hasn't read the ending of part 2 and the third part of this story, ITACHI SURVIVES AND GETS A TALKING CAT!) (Also, who else reads reviews for fanfics besides me, I'm curious) Not that there's anything wrong with having a cat, I have a cat, but I'm getting off topic and this wasn't supposed to be a rant.
*Ahem* Yeah, that was it, I think. Um, please let me know? I'm really curious and I keep pairing him with an OC I made up a while ago that I put in a challenge on my profile and I keep wanting to have it in your story and I'm rambling now and I'll stop now. Okay, bye.
Also, I think this is the longest review I've ever written, oh, happy days. :D Okay, I'll stop now.

I’ve finally finished it. Amazing! You did a great job... by the way, I forgot to mention that I also love the title of your story. I knew from the start that you renamed the Byakugan the Jutsu of Love. And love how you made Hinata a little bit naughty whenever she’s alone with Naruto. And he’s definitely enjoying every moment of it.

I think the best sentence for a girl like Ino would be jail time. She loves to look her best all the time with her beautiful hair and sexy clothes. In the prison, she’d suffer more for she couldn’t afford to get pretty anymore and she’d be around scary criminals, or maybe a psycho ward coz she’s crazy too.

Ino’s turned to a psycho! I don’t like her, she’s just so petty. I wonder how good she is with her plan of messing with Hinata’s mind. And how strong Hinata’s will and how much would it affect her relationship with Naruto.

I think Naruto’s suffocating with the love from Iruka. He needed some space and it was so obvious he wanted some time alone with his woman. He was getting frustrated with all the interruptions while they were having their moments. I would be mad too if I were Naruto or Hinata.

I could really understand Hinata’s feelings. She felt like Naruto betrayed her. Leaving her by sacrificing himself. It didn’t even occurred to him that his death would only mean more pain to those he left behind. Hinata would most likely go back to her old self, a timid girl who lacks confidence, and worst depressed and weak.

Sasuke would lose another precious person. Tsunade also would lose another close to her heart, and might possibly go back to her old ways before she took the job as Hokage. Kakashi also the same as others. And Sakura who’s been trying to help him by changing to a caring friend/sister. Of course, there’s also Iruka and his friends. They would be saddened too. I just really wish you wrote Naruto’s relationship with Iruka and Tsunade a little bit different, the king sized bed in his hospital room, and them sharing the bed just really is not my thing. Naruto sharing a bed is okay if it’s with Hinata. It’s probably just me so forgive me, Marchgirl. But then you wrote this a long time ago so it’s all good.