THE FEELS.

So, so gorgeous.

Great, if depressing, one-shot, and you have a great writing style.

So, so beatiful and sad. I love all your fics.

That was beautiful! What style, what prose, what a story. I like how you had Teddy go back and ask Harry about his past, it underlined your image of Teddy as a confused boy. And the first sentence of each drabble just ties the entire thing together. You're a great writer. Thank you for the story.

I never really thought about Teddy Lupin, thinking of him as just another character of the Harry Potter story, Harry's godchild, Remus and tonks' son, but after this story it is so much real, i get what he must have felt i un derstand and that is the worst and the best part because this understanding breaks my heart. I always thought that he must have thought himself to be so lucky bieng remus lupins son but now...

oh. Wow.

That was incredible, honestly. It touched my heart in every way; I almost teared up.

It's so horrible to think about what Teddy went through.

I reallyreallyreally loved this. The style is very eye-catching, very neat. The words flow in ways I wish I could mimic. Teddy's character was perfect in every sense.

And I must say that I like the thought of him being an actor. I've never seen that before. A wonderful, original idea.

Fantastic job. (:

I like it. The parallelism is well done; the similar wording at the beginning of each of the seven sections, as well as the repeated use of a parenthesis at the end of them (and of the coda), lends a great flavor to this piece. I feel like you really gave Teddy some character in this, which is pretty impressive - I mean, he's very developed for a fic not even sixteen hundred words! He's also quite realistic, so reading this makes me feel like I know him personally. Really great work!

This is a really good story, though a really depressing one. You did a good job with Teddy's character.

This is by far the best characterization of Teddy I've ever seen.

amazing

Very nice! I really liked this story and you gave the character a lot of depth. I liked the bit with Victoire at the end and I loved the idea of him being an actor. I would have never thought about that, but I liked it. The part where he gets in bed next to Andromeda was so sad!

I wish I could think of more things to say about this. I just thought it was so cool that I don't really know what to say... Um... I thought the sort of theme of it was really interesting-the idea of Teddy as a sort of constant liar. The title is really good and I liked the stuff you did with italics and paranthesis and the sort of parts that occurred in each little section.

Anyway, really great work. I loved it. Very, very good work. :)

-Old Fiat

I love how you matched up Harry's and Victoire's sections at the end and the beginning.

I read this story once, a while ago, and I've been looking for it for a while. Your writing is absolutely brilliant, and this makes me feel everything Teddy does and more. The last part, especially, was very powerful.

Fantastic job, and keep writing!

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