Great Story. I would love to read what happens next!

please continue on with this story:)!

Good for Jacob..never was blind to what was happening. Can't wait to read more!

great chapter, please, please up date soon

Have to love Jacob's devious nature!

great short chapter, please up date soon

great stroy please up date soon

Good. Thank you

Yes, I like. You could go a long way with this story line. Please continue.

well, have to say I'm disappointed that they were interrupted. this was a really cold bucket of water...

okay, this was a really short part. but not as short as one from the "Monkey business", that was I think just one sentence. And then we had to wait severeal days for the next one.

hey, great start!

uh, I don't know if this was intentional or not, but this part ends mid-sentence as if there's more, but somehow got cut out accidentally.

So what happens outside? :)

Please update

mean while outside, ... post the rest! this is good, please continue ]

Good start.