This was beautiful, and fullfilling

Man, what a beautifully written piece. This is one of those few fanfics that never gets old when I re-read it. I would love to see more of your Shinji x Asuka pieces in the future.

I think I've read this, maybe, five or six times now? And each time that I do, it never gets old. Keep it up, man. And I do hope you get to write more Asuka/Shinji-centric fics in the future. Or one with Shinji and Rei. Pretty much anything Evangelion related content. Please and thank you.

Very fluffy, in the universe that has almost no happy endings, this was a nice little work that took a positive spin for a change.

I enjoyed this throughly and I hope you write more Asuka stories soon.

- Sincerely, That Baka

Can you do a prequel of Shinji and Asuka during the time post-third impact before order was restored please?

Excellent! A nicely done Asuka introspective, I'm always up for those. :)

I really liked your characterization, and you did a great job summarizing the preceding 6 years of developments and growth. And I'm always a fan of the happy ending. :)

Thanks for writing!

Heartwarming story and extremely well-written. You should be proud. I am putting you up for nomination for the EVA FF Anthology project (see my profile)

:D I really like your stories. It turned out more than alright, I think it was fantastic. I'm glad she cared about hitting him instead of being like, "whatever" and just brushing it off. The thing I like about your stories is, even though they're romantic (at least the ones I've read so far), they also contain good character development. Kudos to you.

A wonderful tale of how much everything has affected Asuka. I think you really managed to distill the essence of her character.

That was beautiful! This is a deep, comprehensive, beautiful, work of art. This made me want to cry. If you find time, write an ending for them. Have it take place years later. Please. I need closure! Thank you for writing something so...amazing.

What's up with the Evangelion category here on FF? I've yet to read a bad fic!

Wonderful exposition on the characters. I especially liked how you showed Asuka's character developed post Third Impact to six years down the line. Its too bad this is a one-shot, I would've liked to read some more of these two

This was extremely well done. I really think you captured Asuka's personality in this particular fic. If there's anything I think you could improve, and this is only a maybe considering that you pretty much did a spot on job the whole fic, it might be, maybe, adding a little more physical description to the story, but even so, I don't know if that would have a negative impact on the way the story is written. Also, maybe a transition of sorts between Asuka and Shinji's POV. Other than that, brilliant. _

This was an insightful look at one of the possible outcomes of instrumentality. I have also noticed that you keep Asuka’s character in check, well done! To me she isn’t a one-dimensional Shinji beater she has depth.

Lord Saturn

I think this was a great story and as an eva fan i really enjoyed it, it was sad, tragic, but uplifting it makes you realise how having someone beside you can make tough times better we all need someone like that anyway great story i really liked it

I loved this story! Great job!