I love this story! So funny at every turn, but that best gift is truly most fitting. Glad to see the spear return too

AW~I loved this and you for writing and sharing this! Thank you!

this was a fantastic read!

Woot! Drunk Larsa is :D

I like the story very much, your Basch x Ashe works are not to be underestimated.

Yes, I've heard the song and I'm pleased to say that it would be added to my playlist in a while. Can you tell me more about this Nalbina folklore? Is it somewhat real (as if it had come from where you live)? I liked that story.

I would prefer no other ending that this, although it is really a little bit cheesy, but whatever, you've pulled it nicely along with your great sense of humor in writing. I enjoyed reading every bit of this story, although I couldn't quite see Basch getting annoyed at shopping for some reason or even be extremely amusing of a person making him a subject of a laugh, haha. I applaud this nice story and I wish you make more of such lighthearted stories! I am happy.

Wow! What a wonderful humourous and beautiful story! (WTH, i put both of those words in one sentence?) And Larsa...oh, you cunning little kid. A true Solidor, only in a good way.

Great job!

OMG his blocking because of love is so romanntic!

And I love the role of Fran, your description.

And this sentence:

"What a fool a woman would be to not fight for this man? He was everything that should be a man. Handsome, strong, loyal and honourable, romantic….he was man" You're perfectly right, 10 times right

And your ending is very funny "Happy birthday, your highness" XD

“I…love her. Dammit….Balthier….I….I love her.”

*Alex flings her arms up* Alleuilla!

The more difficultis done!

“You fight well, but you have a lot to learn. It’s not always about the kill. Killing for the sake of it, is never right. Know your enemies…know their purpose and your own and the fight will be righteous.”

“Blah blah blah.” LOL!

“Hey Basch….” Vaan’s voice squeaked in his ear. “Do you think this Mirror Mail makes me look fat?”

LOL!

OMG Balthier is a pervert but a genius XD

This sentence cracked me up:

"He would be happy for her. He would be extremely happy for her. Basch’s hand reached out for his ale and contemplated Ashe finally remarrying. He had thought of this, many times in the past and Basch hated himself for it. The angst and grief of knowing that he would never, could never, be the one to kiss her, to hold her or make love to her….it hurt him every day. But Ashe needed to be happy. It was all that mattered."

It's so cute *cry*

It's cool I learned romantic terms like "enamoured""besotted…”“Infatuated" "Smitten" "in love with”

My god, Basch snapped people? What will he do when she will shops with Balthier?

I can't wait reading the next chapter...

“Ah…this is so sweet.” said the shop lady. “Is this your daughter?”

Basch had never ran so quickly in his life.

That's my fav part! XD

Basch/Penelo's fans must be very very very irritated!

I prefer review your story chater by chapter because there are a lot of extracts that I find awesome!

I love your beginning.

In this chapter,

"Clang clang, clunk….screech. That was the sound of discomfort from Basch’s armour. Larsa already imagined the look of horror on the older man’s face. Shopping was not for him." and all the extracts related to the armour are so well found and funny!

The next chapter will be very interesting

Aww! I love-no-adore this fanfic! This IS the best fanfic I've ever read-and that will never change!

I hope to see more fanfics like this soon!