| Reviews for The Unhinging of Charlie Swan |
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  Bella chapter 4 . 2/24 Haha, I always love your stories. This was amazing. If you can see my name, yes, I know, it is Bella. I have dark hair, too. Keep on writing. |
| michelle chapter 4 . 4/29/2017 please write more! |
| Sharese hathorn chapter 2 . 10/29/2016 L lie Jake |
| Sharese hathorn chapter 1 . 10/29/2016 L love you so is ask me a Dath yes or no |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2016 Amazing. |
 andrearose18 chapter 4 . 5/14/2015 This was such a fun read. Love you the way you wrote it. |
| zivadavidncis chapter 2 . 2/2/2014 I really loved this story. It was very funny and well wrote. |
| Child of Dreams chapter 4 . 2/1/2014 (perks up) Jacob Black in my bedroom at 3 a.m.? Hell yes, I'm interested! ESPECIALLY if he imprints on me! |
| cloemarrie chapter 4 . 9/30/2013 LMAO! First story to make me laugh! Thanks for the laugh lmao |
| PastOneonta chapter 4 . 8/13/2013 This is great! I loved all of it, fun, energetic, sweet Jake and Bella making the right choice. Charlie was fantastic, hysterical and struggling and being Dad cop Charlie. The last chapter was perfect, chasing Jake, Bella calling the police and the swear words. Really fun. |
| GeezerWench chapter 4 . 6/8/2013 Enjoyed this. Poor Charlie. |
| GeezerWench chapter 3 . 6/8/2013 I wonder ... how does Jake feel being #2? Not her first choice. He's the consolation prize. Bella says to herself she'll never get Edward back, so she might as well hang with Jake. Poor Jake. Charlie didn't handle that too badly. LOL |
| GeezerWench chapter 2 . 6/8/2013 Well, Charlie went a little overboard. LOL He's only getting away with it because he's the Chief of Police. |
| snow eopard chapter 4 . 5/29/2013 oh my lord i can't stop smiling that is so damn funny i have fallen off my still already lol |
| milkecake chapter 4 . 4/1/2013 That was so funny! I laughed my butt of for every story! This charlie is so much funnier than the twilight one! Good work! I love it! |
