I know from the start when I read the title, this story gonna have sad ending
Uwaaah~ So saaad~

Ouch. Right in the feels. Great story tho.

If anyone doesn't want to read the entire fic because of the extremely disturbing part of sexual acts with a little kid( I, myself being one of them) they should keep some patience and read the very last chapter coz honestly, it's worth the patience. The quotes in the last chapter had perfectly mingled with it making the last chapter unique in its own style.. It wasn't much of a surprise coz i could guess such an ending( though the fire thing was unexpected) but yet I was blown away with this chapter...Cool thing...

OMG! i just finished reading your brilliant story. I had to stop myself from crying (which was very hard) because i'm in a library and it would be very weird and awkward for me to just start crying in my local library but seriously good jod! :D

So sad and wonderful

Aww! Cute! XD

I'm begging you to update Obey Thy Master.

This story is like a preview for next quarter in school. We're going to read Romeo & Juliet. Ironic, yes? X)

Wait, I thought Romeo & Juliet was a romance...

They won't see see each other again. (I forgot that Ryuk was supposed to give Light a heart attack. Where was he, anyway?) L's going to heaven, and Light's going to MU. 8_( I just thought that L should right in the ~shot~ Then I realized it was burned. ~neck~

WAAAA! WHY? why? why the hell they have to die? im sad, waaaaa

but it was such an amazing story anyway, you're very good at this. hugs, chelly.

woooh! crazy love S2 so cute!

OMG! LIGHT IS SUCH A BITCH! WAAA i really want to cry for that boy. Light is evil! xD but i will continuing reading the story

you SHOULD have put TRAGEDY! Geez if they were both going to die i wouldnt have read it! and it ended way to abruptly...i was enjoying the story when bam is ends with them dying...how could you? :'( i LOVED L!

Perhaps a little rushed.

And I don't agree with your portrayal of Light. He seems very bi-polar in this story. One minute desperately loving L than the next annoyed at the ugly little creature and not at all worried about him running off or something. Didn't ring true for me.

But beside that, it's a well written story and I think the plot was very interesting and I enjoyed the background of Shakespeare!

Cheers and thanks

Okay I read this about year ago but I had to reply. I FUCKING LOVE this Story. The thought of Light with a younger L is so erotic to me.(haha i swear I'm not a pedo) Maybe it the fact of how innocent L is for Light to be taking advantage,but it was brilliant. Your style is breathtaking and the plot was detailed. The only thing that I could complain about was the ending do to the fact I hate angsty endings. Though I guess it was okay for this story seeings how it made sense to end it that way, and they did love each other to the end. Romio and Juliet ending are way overrated and not to mention overdone but Hell with this it was acceptable. Pedo Light and younger L was such a rare treat, hopefully more stories will arise from this. You happen to be one of my favorite authors, one of the best, yet sadly you haven't been on for what seems to be ages. Obey thy Master is just to good for words and seems like you abandoned them all. TT Please Update the rest; you're to brilliant to leave us hanging.

Great story so far. Now can I kill light for being an insuferable ass? Haha, joking. Good luck with any current or future stories.