Reviews for TMNT Story |
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![]() ![]() Ur lazy! Make your chapters longer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thrilling |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it can't wait for more xxxxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() best story ever written about them, please please update soon! |
![]() ![]() Please continue this story! It's so good, and im a nanny for a blind kid who wont calm down until I read him this story. Please continue. Btw: Your really talented at writing. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i thought this story was great |
![]() ![]() ![]() not bad for a fic made me lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Please add more soon ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Way awsome and interesting story. I can't wait to read more, so please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is such a good story! update soon please! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...umm...I do realize that people like to swear alot in stories...but that's kinda getting old. I think u need a bit more description: Like which school, teacher, friends, etc. Just small details that make the story a bit more interesting. Wanting to know how she handles living in the swers with a rat and 4 turtles. But, this has a good plot. Adds some sort of feeling for why Reya doesn't like Don (which I can't wait to find out cuz he's my fav!) and I bet she's closer to Raph. Anyway, this is not a flame cuz I like this story and have high hopes for it. Can't wait to read the next chapter! ONCE AGAIN: THIS IS NOT A FLAME! LOL |