Reviews for The Curse
brenda sianipar chapter 31 . 6/12
I. FUCKING. LOVE. THIS. MASTERPIECE! You are a GENIUS! I freaking love u! Now yes, I am really REALLY sad that this story is not complete, yet it is WORTH IT! This is the BEST fanfic ive EVER read! but speaking of, I really really hope you are healthy and safe Len, please take care. Love u! (I will babble more on PM:))
Guest chapter 31 . 5/28
Update
VampirePrincess123 chapter 2 . 5/19
I just realized Sakura has long hair in the story
VampirePrincess123 chapter 31 . 5/3
so good though I really hope and wish you are alright and able to finish this book. I admit I was hesitant to read this considering that it was unfinished but after reading the 1st chapter I was hooked. the interactions between team seven is everything!

i can't wait for the reunion of Kakashi and Sai with NaruSakuSasu and of course the anticipated NaruHina reunion.

ugh... I really hope this story will be able to be finished! DON'T LEAVE US HANGING IN SUSPENSE!
VampirePrincess123 chapter 31 . 5/3
Next UpdateI'll aim for a week"

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it's been how many years?!
Hitori no kage chapter 12 . 5/2
I think you should be more confident in your writing! I love the dialogue and character interactions, as well as the OCs too. To tell the truth, I often reread this story as a reference in terms of smooth scene transitions vs action and dialogue transitions, when it comes to writing my own stories. You do a fine job within this genre and it doesn't lack the mystery within the horror. I actually find this preferable to the stereotypical and all too predictable horror stories of ouja boardgames gone wrong, going to the wrong bathroom stall (loll), exorcisms, and poltergeist. At least here, it is original and still makes sense within this world's foundation (depending on where you intend the horror/mystery story to proceed). One thing I did take notice of though, is some run-on sentences here and there, but I sometimes do that too.

It's been a while since I last saw this story updated along with the much anticipated Vengeance, of which I thoroughly enjoy rereading as well, as plot development and interaction reference. I hope to see this (and Vengeance) updated soon! I understand the frustrations of self-critique and demand for excellence in writing as I have my fair share of writer's block (still struggling with my own chapter of near 2 years in the making...) I wish you all the best as a fellow writer and hope to hear from you with the next post!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17
Can u please please complete it... It's an amazing fanfiction... Ihv read it about a hundred times... Nd im desperate for the entire story... It would be awesome if u complete it...
Shehawah chapter 1 . 4/12
It’s been way too long since you’ve updated this story! Please don’t tell me you’ve given up on it. I need to see the finish ugh! This is by far one of my most favourite stories I’ve ever had the pleasure of reading on here. Hands down.
Tajinprincess chapter 2 . 4/4
love their interaction.
Tajinprincess chapter 1 . 4/4
I'm reading this in my dark room... alone...
Mae chapter 31 . 3/24
Hey! Its me again, after how many years. Ill still be coming here to check if theres an update. Wish you were ok and healthy author sama
nastyakot04 chapter 1 . 12/22/2019
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Guest chapter 31 . 12/4/2019
Hey... really love ur work_Best story ever
I really hope u update...I love horror movies, so I'm really curious about why da creepy little thing become what she is :) Don't give up on this masterpiece...tbh this story creep da life of me but that's da beauty of it :D (read it in da dark hehe..lucky it didn't give me nightmares)
So pls..if u wish Update :)
FairyLetters chapter 25 . 11/17/2019
The fact that Naruto and Sasuke have their limitations in this story makes the whole plot more and more interesting and gripping. Smart!Sakura, Scared(finally)!Naruto, and Understanding(Coming_in_terms_with_his_shortcomings)!Sasuke. I don't see what Naruto fan can hate this story; it is everything a real horror (as far as Naruto AU goes) should be.

I'm not scared, not really, but I find something anout Sakura's character annoying. Probably its her overkind heart... :/
FairyLetters chapter 20 . 11/16/2019
Oh no. *pales*
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