Congratulations. Your story is very well written; Hermione's feelings and reactions are realilstic and canonlike. I hope to read more soon.

The last 2 chapters are a little weird. It's interesting story so far 8-)

Nice story. A little confusing, but I like your writing xx

Wow it's really good ! :o

that was a very strange encounter with the dementors that Hermione had and Lupin seemed interested in it too. I can't wait to see where the hell your going with this! Update soon please. And I'm sorry I didn't put this story on my alerts list, I definitely meant to! Its so intriquing.

Glad to see this story continued.

Wow, I really like this story. I'm quite puzzeled really by it. What is this almost looming presence or is it another self? It's strange and what's going on with that invisibilty thing she can do? I really can't wait for you to update. This is a very mysterious, interesting fic.

great update!

It is too early to know 'where' is the plot of this fic. But this is interesting and very well written.

Please continue writing.

hi

I like it

so please update soon

bye

wasu