Ducking hell there is way to much context. You gotta show not fucking tell.

Species:human. origin: Gaia/Earth/soul. subspecies: hyper maxamus adaptus erectus hyper sapient overdrive break past limit evolutionus. galactic title: tari.
Shows show up: Stargate/Battlestar Galactica/MegaMan/MegaMan x/MegaMan zero/Deus Ex: Mankind Divided/Buffy the vampire Slayer/blank/blank/blank/blank/blank.

Is there a sequel ir dies it continue on another website?

Great story .

As resistance think how manufacture Chiefs weapons .

Excellent story you really need to finish it...

Shame this story was abandoned, it was really good

I don’t like chiefs OOC personality. He’s also nerfed quite hard. He can lift like 80 tons and could easily take hundreds of shots from a primitive firearm. Also there’s no way in hell he would give up his armor to pretend to be a marine. That’s stupid.

hope for more chapters

There would be no way in hell Chief would ever say what he was to a cylon. Especially since they are hostile.

I'm not a huge fan of Battlestar Galactica, never got the chance to really get into the series, but you've done a magnificent job of introducing the premises and concepts of the series through the eye of the more familiar characters of Master Chief and Cortana.
I love what you've done with this, and appreciate that you did so much in a single year. Really, nineteen chapters of THIS quality in a little under 16 months?! I'm impressed!

On that note, I do hope you eventually pick this up again, or maybe include a summary of the conclusion, just to satisfy curiosities. I know how hard it is to get back in the saddle of an old but good story, there's a groove that's difficult to settle back into.

I cant stand Chief in this

This story is quite interesting. Hope the next chapter comes soon.

This is such an amazing story. I get that it's abandoned but would you mind telling me how you planned to end it

HURRY THE FUCK UP!