I lost one of my sisters to suicide on September 19th. It has been a long, slow, dark path with only moments of glory in it since. But I read this story this morning, and the litany Peter speaks is - in Lewis's sense of the word - good. It is from good, and it does good things, and it is good. I sent it to another of my sisters, hoping it would bless her as well. Three weeks past, my college roommate, sister though we've been separated for almost a decade, lost her grandmother. She, too, loves Narnia, and I prayed this would bless her when it I sent it to her as well.
May God continue to use your imagine, your words, and your writing to show the truth of His kingdom. I can ask no greater blessing for an author, and I ask it as thanks for what you gave me this morning.

another story such as this perhaps

i love your series
perhaps you could write more fanfics about susan. about her thoughts when she refuses to join her siblings when they talk of narnia, when they die and she's left alone and when she finally dies and goes to aslan's country.

I have relished and cherished all your stories as I do few others, though I am not sure if you are even continuing them. If you are, however, I would like to see a scene where Eustace introduced Jill to the Penseives, similar to "When We Were Kings".

So, I've read almost every story of yours and each time I'm completely blown away by your writing and how effortlessly you make story-telling seem. You capture the depth and essence of Narnia, unlike many fanfictions I've read here, and every story is a breath of fresh, sweet air. You are pretty much my favourite fanfiction writer and I eagerly await more beautiful stories.

D'awwww at all the fussing. Appropriate title, And So the End Begins
:)

Oh my. You got the Peter and Edmund relationship down pat here, so perfectly. Thank you.

Tegi

I thought I reviewed this long ago.

So beautiful and so heartbreaking.

I'd love you to write about the train and then Aslan's Country. It would be a lovely end to your stories. :)

Wow! I love the storyline. I'm a huge fan of the Narnia series, and really enjoyed reading this one.

Beautiful.

That makes so much sense!

-Dyslexic Nerd

I found this so sad and yet, comforting at the same time. I love the bond between Peter and Edmund and how you wrote it out so well. I can see how this would have been troubling times for the two of them. Excellent work :)

Awww... "The Balcony" is playing right now and it's so PERFECT! God, I love your stories!

Keep writing and if ever you need a spark of inspiration or a second (third, fourth, fifth?) pair of eyes, gimme a buzz. Your stories are an inspiration to all.

Cheers. Andi.

thank you for a wonderful story!

You and your writing amazing me.