Reviews for The Deception
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 1/21/2016
A small twist? Well, if that was so, I'm a bit scared to know what you would consider as a big one. XD

This Severitus really takes the cake. Talk about revelations. XD

My, my Severus' Slytherin ways may have rubbed off on Lily a little too much.. But then again, since she was pregnant with Harry at the time she formulated her plan, it's possible that it might have been Harry's Slytherin nature influencing his mum. XD
excessivelyperky chapter 8 . 1/14/2016
Well, at least Harry is listening, which is more than I ever expected.

But I can understand the temptation to help Molly kill Bella!

And yes, after Voldie's death is a very, very good time to run for it.
excessivelyperky chapter 7 . 1/14/2016
Oh, dear. So, how did James Potter end up the rich bully he so obviously was during school days?
excessivelyperky chapter 6 . 1/14/2016
Ah. So it's Snape less than pleasant role to make sure Harry sees all the right memories. How spiffy. Harry will only believe Snape's memories if he thinks Snape is dead, you know...

And yes, Snape is losing his mind thinking that he'll get out of this alive after all his hard work. How like Dumbledore to assure Snape's death through his loyalty to the Order.
excessivelyperky chapter 5 . 1/14/2016
Yippy skippy-what lovely revelation await Snape *now*? But once Harry sees Snape's memories he'll know what to do.

Snape needs to get out of there...
excessivelyperky chapter 4 . 1/14/2016
Snape still trusts Albus? Really? Well, I hope he survives *this* little surprise.
excessivelyperky chapter 3 . 1/14/2016
Why on earth would he want to go back to Hogwarts? He'll be hexed by both sides, since he was so cleverly set up to be hated by the Order, and Voldie certainly won't be happy to see him again.
excessivelyperky chapter 2 . 1/14/2016
Hermione *could* have remembered that dittany helped Harry with his bite from Nagini, but it's pretty obvious that she chose not to. No, I don't think Snape needs to worry about any help from any party, really. I don't think she was that blinded by emotion, save possibly for hating Snape.

Snape really should have transfigured something into his body or at least a mass of blood and tissue (a werewolf might have come by for dinner, after all).

I don't think Snape has any illusions about the predicament Dumbledore put him in at this point.
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
Oh, I hope this means that Snape has a way to survive all this-it just wasn't fair that he died that way he did.

And if I recall canon correctly, Harry was shocked at what happened to Snape, but didn't feel any actual sorrow or dismay (rather like how he felt when he nearly killed Draco Malfoy). Sadly, Snape isn't a real person to anyone in the Order, except to be hated.

Good start, though.
wingnutdawn chapter 15 . 9/16/2015
I have really enjoyed reading this story. It is well written.
Madlenita chapter 9 . 4/18/2013
A dragon, i forgot about that?
Thanks for this chapter...
Madlenita chapter 8 . 4/18/2013
I like how Severus helped during Battle of Hogwart.
Madlenita chapter 7 . 4/18/2013
Another really big surprise...
Madlenita chapter 6 . 4/18/2013
Ok, definitelly didn't expected this...
Madlenita chapter 5 . 4/18/2013
Wow, really surprise...
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