Short, but REALLY good.

I clicked on this and I was expecting something else and now my heart is broken

Now I wanna give Molly a hug...
And it makes sense that she, and every mother who has lost a child after Halloween 1981, to feels this way! :D

Yes, I could easily see Molly thinking this. But it wasn't Lily's love that saved Harry; it was Snape's. If he hadn't winkled a promise to spare her out of Voldemort, her death would have been as useless as every other murdered parent's.

I don't think so. Fred was an accident. Molly does not think this. If she did she would be irrational and injust and silly and wrong. Molly saved Ginny. And its not only Lily's love, it is her death.
Now, you can only die once. Imagine Molly being able to save Fred by dying herself, and afterwards, Bellatrix would kill Ginny . And maybe then Bellatrix would be able to save Voldemort. Because she kind of loved him too. Fred alive. Molly and Ginny dead. Voldemort ... able to flee, or winning.
I guess Molly would know this.
...Yet, maybe sometimes Molly is that stupid. *sigh*
thx

amazing drabble and poor molly, no mother should have to feel such pain

This is so good! It's realistic and touching, with a brilliant word choice.

However(shame on you)I now have a mental image of Lily screaming profanities at Molly, and that maybe she couldn't have saved Fred, but she saved Ginny, and that there are casualties in a war and Molly should just GET THE FUCK OVER IT. And Molly would be too busy crying to talk back, because she knows Lily is right.

Actually, I like this image. Could you write something about it? Please?

I think my heart just cracked a bit. Short, sweet and to the point.

Damn.

Was not expecting that.

I love how straightforward and blunt you are, the shortness just made the point even more powerful and poignant.

Oh my god. I can't. This is 116 words, and I'm already tearing up. omg. I can't even. But she saved Ginny, didn't she? :'( 3 Just. Lovely.

Wow. That actually makes sense...

heartbreacking. it makes me cry everytine i read it.

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This is really, really impressive writing. It's so short, yet so powerful and harsh.

Wow, um, ouch.

Totally not what I was expecting when I clicked the link for this story - though, to be honest, I don't really think I was expecting much at all, except a rather interestingly short read that my mind could stand to take in at 1:29 AM.

Nonetheless, that hurt my heart a bit.